STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION
"The Neutral Zone"
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Written by
Maurice Hurley
Directed by
James Conway
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2ND REV. FINAL DRAFT
MARCH 17, 1988
STAR TREK: "The Neutral Zone" - REV. 3/18/88 - CAST
STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION
"The Neutral Zone"
CAST
PICARD THREE HUMANS
RIKER CLARE RAYMOND
BEVERLY RALPH OFFENHOUSE
DATA SONNY CLEMONDS
TROI
WORF ROMULANS
GEORDI COMMANDER TEBOK
WESLEY (pronounced TAY-bok)
SUB-COMMANDER THEI
Non-Speaking (pronounced TIE)
SECURITY GUARD
NURSE WRIGHT
Voice-Over
COMPUTER
STAR TREK: "The Neutral Zone" - REV. 3/18/88 - SETS
STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION
"The Neutral Zone"
SETS
INTERIORS EXTERIORS
USS ENTERPRISE USS ENTERPRISE
MAIN BRIDGE
CONFERENCE ROOM DERELICT (MODULE)
SICKBAY
GUEST LOUNGE ROMULAN CRUISER
CLARE'S QUARTERS
SONNY'S QUARTERS
CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM
CORRIDOR
OBSERVATION LOUNGE
DERELICT
CONTROL AREA
SECOND ROOM
ROMULAN CRUISER
11:[5,#b],19:[1,#b]
STAR TREK: "The Neutral Zone" - 3/17/88 - TEASER 1.
STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION
"The Neutral Zone"
TEASER
FADE IN:
1 OMITTED
2 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL)
The great ship is motionless as it awaits the return of
its captain. A short distance off, and APPEARING very
small, is another vehicle - also drifting.
RIKER (V.O.)
First officer's log, stardate 41986.0.
The captain has left the ship for
a conference and we are awaiting
his return. It is unusual for us
to be motionless, and a unique
experience for everyone concerned.
3 INT. MAIN BRIDGE
GEORDI is at Conn - WORF at Tactical - DATA at Science
One, RIKER is in the Command position. Troi is off the
bridge in her office. Everyone is looking at the
viewscreen.
DATA
This is quite intriguing. It is
transmitting a carrier signal on
a frequency which has not been used
for centuries.
RIKER
Is there a message?
DATA
None. Just the carrier, possibly
intended for encoded computer or
telemetry information.
WORF
I have never seen a space vehicle
like it.
STAR TREK: "The Neutral Zone" - 3/17/88 - TEASER 2.
3 CONTINUED:
DATA
Strictly speaking, it is not a
"space vehicle." It appears to
be a satellite, similar in its
rudimentary design to those which
orbited Earth in the late
twentieth and early twenty-first
centuries.
RIKER
Three hundred years ago.
(mostly as a joke)
Then there probably aren't any
life signs?
DATA
None.
Data continues studying the readout.
DATA
(continuing)
The power is solar... quite
primitive. There is however
minimum life support.
GEORDI
I wonder how it got out here.
If it was in orbit around Earth,
even at maximum impulse -- and
there's no way it could travel
any faster, it would have taken
a dozen centuries to get here.
WORF
At its present speed and heading,
the vehicle will eventually enter
the Kazis Binary system and will
certainly be destroyed.
Worf turns to face Riker.
WORF
(continuing)
Sir, I could attach a tractor beam
and adjust its heading.
RIKER
I think not, Mister Worf. It's just
a piece of space debris. If we
weren't sitting here waiting for
the captain, we wouldn't have even
noticed it. Leave it be. Let
nature take its course. How long
until Captain Picard returns?
STAR TREK: "The Neutral Zone" - REV. 3/18/88 - TEASER 3.
3 CONTINUED: (2)
WORF
The last communication indicated
it would be several hours.
DATA
Commander, request permission to
investigate this vehicle.
RIKER
Why, Data? It's just a derelict.
DATA
It is a piece of history. The
opportunity to examine such an
ancient vehicle does not come
around very often, and as you
pointed out, we do have the time.
RIKER
All right, Data. But be ready
to beam back before the captain
returns.
DATA
Thank you, sir.
RIKER
Lieutenant Worf -- go with him.
WORF
Aye, sir.
The two EXIT the bridge.
4
thru OMITTED
6
A7 EXT. SPACE - A MODULE (OPTICAL)
drifts.
7 INT. DERELICT - SMALL CONTROL AREA (OPTICAL)
as they BEAM IN. They are in a small control area.
The equipment we see is late twentieth century in
design. Worf is tense -- ready for the unexpected.
Data scans the area with his tricorder.
STAR TREK: "The Neutral Zone" - REV. 3/18/88 - TEASER 4.
7 CONTINUED:
DATA
Minimal oxygen atmosphere.
(indicates)
An ancient solar generator,
still operating.
WORF
Computer -- status report.
Nothing happens.
WORF
(continuing)
Computer...
Data interrupts.
DATA
In the late twentieth century,
computers were not voice activated,
Worf.
Data examines the keyboard.
DATA
(continuing)
Notice the readouts -- dials,
needle machines, gauges.
Remarkable what they used three
centuries ago. The on-board
computers have ceased functioning.
I may be able to download this old
style disk drive back to the
Enterprise.
8 WORF
APPROACHES the door, clearly expecting it to slide open.
He waves a hand in front of it.
WORF
It must be sealed -- probably
with age. I will blast it open.
DATA
Not necessary.
He reaches down and turns a handle, physically slides
the door OPEN.
9 INT. DERELICT - THE SECOND ROOM
They move forward.
STAR TREK: "The Neutral Zone" - REV. 3/18/88 - TEASER 5.
10 INT. ENTERPRISE - MAIN BRIDGE (INTERCUT AS NEEDED)
Riker is sitting at the Command Chair.
RIKER
Data, this is Riker. What
have you found?
DATA
Very little so far.
GEORDI
I have picked up the captain's
shuttle.
RIKER
E.T.A.?
GEORDI
Twelve minutes, sir.
RIKER
Alert Main Shuttle Bay.
GEORDI
Aye, sir.
11 INT. DERELICT - THE SECOND ROOM
As Worf and Data ENTER the other compartment they see a
series of crypts, lining both sides of the room. Each
glass-covered and coffin-like in design, with a
computerized panel above it. The panel both monitors
and controls the crypt.
12 CRYPT
As Data clears away the frost TO REVEAL a shriveled
human form. It's all BLACKENED AND HIDEOUS. Data
REACTS.
DATA
The seal was broken and the
environment has been corrupted.
Data moves to the next crypt. Beside him, Worf wipes
the frost from a third crypt. He has found another
shriveled form.
WORF
Here's another.
STAR TREK: "The Neutral Zone" - 3/17/88 - TEASER 6.
12 CONTINUED:
Data wipes away the frost from the crypt by him.
DATA
This one is empty.
He easily lifts the cover.
DATA
(continuing)
It has been forced open and the
occupant removed.
In the b.g. Worf is wiping the frost from another
crypt.
WORF
Commander. Look at this.
Data steps over.
12A ANOTHER ANGLE
Through the hole which Worf has wiped in the frost,
WE CAN SEE a human -- a WOMAN. About thirty-five,
attractive and unconscious.
OFF Worf and Data's REACTIONS, WE:
FADE OUT.
END OF TEASER
STAR TREK: "... Neutral... " - REV. 3/21/88 - ACT ONE 7.
ACT ONE
FADE IN:
12B INT. DERELICT - THE SECOND ROOM
Worf and Data are still beside the frozen woman.
WORF
Has she been frozen for an
extended journey?
DATA
If that were the purpose, there
would be evidence of a more
sophisticated monitoring system.
This container is designed solely
for refrigeration.
WORF
What is the destination?
DATA
I do not believe they were going
anywhere. This vehicle should
still be in Earth orbit.
WORF
There is no way it could break
orbit and travel this distance
on its own power. Not in three
hundred years -- not in three
thousand. Some intelligent lifeform
must have brought it to
this section of the galaxy.
DATA
(indicating the crypts
with the shriveled
forms)
These crypts were opened.
(indicating the empty
crypts)
The occupants in those were taken.
WORF
Why take some of them, destroy
others, and leave her apparently
untouched?
DATA
Perhaps they learned all they
could from the others. We may
never know.
STAR TREK: "... Neutral... " - REV. 3/21/88 - ACT ONE 8.
12B CONTINUED:
Data moves down the line of crypts, wipes another To
REVEAL the perfectly preserved face of a forty-seven-year-old
MALE.
OFF Data's REACTION:
13 OMITTED
14 INT. ENTERPRISE - MAIN BRIDGE
Data and Worf have for the moment been forgotten.
GEORDI
The captain's shuttle is
approaching Main Shuttle Bay.
PICARD'S COM VOICE
Enterprise, this is the captain.
Number One, I want to get underway
as soon as the shuttle is secure.
RIKER
Aye, sir. We will make all
preparations.
(to the Away Team)
Commander Data, return to the
Enterprise -- immediately.
DATA'S COM VOICE
We have run into an unusual
situation here. There are people
on-board. Frozen.
RIKER
Frozen. How many?
15 INT. DERELICT - THE SECOND ROOM (INTERCUT AS NEEDED)
Data and Worf in the middle of the room.
DATA
Three. What should I do? The
vehicle has suffered severe
damage. Most of the systems
have failed.
RIKER
Are you recommending they be
transferred to the Enterprise?
STAR TREK: "The Neutral Zone" - 3/17/88 - ACT ONE 9.
15 CONTINUED:
DATA
I do not think we should leave
them here. With your permission,
sir, we will be returning with
three containers.
RIKER
Whatever you do, do it quickly.
16 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL)
traveling at impulse speed.
17 INT. MAIN BRIDGE
Captain Picard STRIDES ONTO the bridge.
PICARD
Number One, I want a meeting on
the Observation Deck. Mister La
Forge, set course zero-five-eight,
mark nine-seven-three.
GEORDI
Aye -- laying in the course now.
(pause)
Captain, those coordinates will
take us to the Neutral Zone.
REACTIONS from the others to the destination.
PICARD
That's correct Mister La Forge, warp
factor eight.
GEORDI
Warp eight.
PICARD
Engage. Mister La Forge, you have
the bridge.
He leads them OFF the bridge.
18 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL)
as it accelerates to warp speed.
STAR TREK: "The Neutral Zone" - 3/17/88 - ACT ONE 10.
19 INT. CONFERENCE ROOM
The regulars are at their positions, except Beverly.
PICARD
Two Federation outposts in Sector
three-zero have been destroyed.
There has been no communication
with any Federation starbases in
Sector three-one since stardate
41903.2.
WORF
Romulans.
PICARD
That is the assumption.
RIKER
There's been no direct contact
with the Romulans since the Tomed
Incident.
PICARD
The question is: Why here? Why
now? What's their objective, if
indeed they have one? For half
a century there's barely a whisper
about them and now for no apparent
reason they seem to be back with
a roar. Why?
RIKER
Almost everything we know about
them is based on rumor and
conjecture.
PICARD
The strategic decision is to send
one ship.
RIKER
The Enterprise.
PICARD
Yes.
WORF
There is a risk. We could get
out there and find ourselves
greatly over-matched.
PICARD
True enough -- it is a gamble.
STAR TREK: "... Neutral... " - REV. 3/18/88 - ACT ONE 11.
19 CONTINUED:
RIKER
This first encounter... coming
so suddenly after all this time.
There's a very good chance it's
a setup.
DATA
Perhaps the Romulans are probing.
They want to see how we react.
WORF
Captain, we should expect
hostilities.
PICARD
Prepare as always. If force is
needed we will use it, but that
will mean we have failed. Our
goal here is to establish some
kind of relations with the
Romulans -- failing that -- to
convince them of our resolve and
to do this without resorting to
force. Right now, the general
feeling is that they are seeking
a confrontation. They may want
to test themselves in battle
against a Federation starship to
gauge how much we have advanced.
Personally, I think it is
possible they have different
motives altogether based on needs
which we have not identified.
If that's the case... I must know
it.
(to Troi)
Counselor -- I will need a complete
profile on them.
TROI
There is limited information, but
I will prepare something.
PICARD
Data. Extrapolate for me the
logical progression of their
technical advancement;
specifically, but not restricted
to -- weapons.
DATA
Aye, sir.
STAR TREK: "The Neutral Zone" - 3/17/88 - ACT ONE 12.
19 CONTINUED: (2)
PICARD
(to everybody)
I want this thought through
completely. Anticipate, as much
as you can, all the possible
permutations.
He looks around the room.
PICARD
(continuing)
Computer, how long before we
arrive at the Neutral Zone?
COMPUTER VOICE
Nineteen hours, twenty-eight
minutes.
PICARD
We will reassemble in six hours.
Let's be smart. No surprises.
I would much rather outthink them,
than outfight them. Questions?
There are none. The meeting breaks up.
20 INT. MAIN BRIDGE
As Picard, Riker and the others COME ON to the bridge.
Geordi is in the Command seat.
GEORDI
(as he gets up)
Captain.
(then:)
Doctor Crusher said she would like
to talk with you, when you
finished your meeting.
PICARD
Thank you.
(on Com)
Doctor Crusher, this is the
captain.
BEVERLY'S COM VOICE
Oh, good. Captain, could you
possibly join me in Sickbay?
Picard hesitates.
STAR TREK: "... Neutral... " - REV. 3/23/88 - ACT ONE 13.
20 CONTINUED:
BEVERLY'S COM VOICE
(continuing)
I would not ask you if it wasn't
important.
PICARD
I will be right there.
(to Riker)
Take the Conn, Number One. I
won't be long.
Picard EXITS THE SHOT as Riker takes his position.
21 INT. SICKBAY
Picard ENTERS.
PICARD
What is it, Doctor?
BEVERLY
It's the people from the capsule.
PICARD
Capsule? People? What people?
BEVERLY
The people Data beamed over.
PICARD
I wasn't aware he had.
On the medical tables behind her are THREE HUMANS
covered with sheets.
BEVERLY
Well, he did and they were frozen.
I thawed them.
PICARD
You what?
BEVERLY
I didn't know what else to do.
The crypts in which they had been
frozen were literally falling
apart. It was either that...
or...
PICARD
What's their condition?
STAR TREK: "... Neutral... " - REV. 3/22/88 - ACT ONE 14.
21 CONTINUED:
BEVERLY
Right now they are all sleeping.
Each of them needed minor medical
attention... minor "now", but
"then" their conditions were
obviously terminal. One had a
heart problem, another had an
advanced case of emphysema and
extensive liver damage. But the
most surprising thing, is that
each of them had been frozen after
they died.
PICARD
After they died?
BEVERLY
Exactly. Cryonics. It was a
kind of fad in the late twentieth
century. People feared dying.
It terrified them. At the moment
of death, they would be frozen,
so that later... some time in the
future, when presumably medical
science had a cure for whatever
killed them, they would be thawed
back to life, healed and sent on
about their business.
PICARD
Well, for this group, apparently
it worked.
Picard STEPS OVER to the com panel.
PICARD
(continuing)
Lieutenant Commander Data, please
report to Sickbay -- immediately.
22 INT. MAIN BRIDGE
Data is a Science Station Two. He looks up.
DATA
Permission to leave the bridge.
RIKER
Granted.
Data walks toward the turbolift.
STAR TREK: "The Neutral Zone" - 3/17/88 - ACT ONE 15.
23 INT. SICKBAY
ON Picard.
PICARD
I am never critical of any member
of my staff being curious, but...
the timing is just so...
DATA
I could not leave them there,
Captain. The condition of the
vehicle was deteriorating.
PICARD
But, Data -- they were already
dead. I mean... what more could
have happened to them?
DATA
I see your point, Captain, but
at the time...
Picard nods.
PICARD
You're right -- under the
circumstances I would have done
exactly the same.
Picard turns to Beverly.
BEVERLY
When they arrived... what was I
supposed to do? Not help them?
Again Picard has no answer.
BEVERLY
(continuing)
My question is: What do we do
with them now?
PICARD
What are the options?
DATA
We cannot go back and return them
to their ship.
BEVERLY
We can't refreeze them.
STAR TREK: "... Neutral... " - REV. 3/21/88 - ACT ONE 16.
23 CONTINUED:
PICARD
They are alive now, so we have
to treat them as living human
beings.
BEVERLY
Alive and well, just waiting to
be awakened.
Picard is perplexed.
BEVERLY
(continuing)
I have them sedated but they
should be up and about as soon
as possible.
Picard takes a deep breath.
PICARD
Well...
He looks around for a moment.
PICARD
(continuing)
Then, there really is no choice.
BEVERLY
None that I can see.
PICARD
Before you wake them, I want
Security here.
(touching com)
Mister Worf, report to Sickbay.
24 BEVERLY
She goes to the first one in the line and touches the
hypospray to her neck.
STAR TREK: "The Neutral Zone" - 3/17/88 - ACT ONE 17.
25 WOMAN
Slowly she wakes up. Looks around. At Sickbay. At
the equipment, then at Beverly and Picard. She
swallows. Worf ENTERS Sickbay. The woman takes one
look at them and her head falls back on the table. Out
"cold" again.
PICARD
... Welcome to the twenty-fourth
century.
FADE OUT.
END OF ACT ONE
STAR TREK: "... Neutral... " - REV. 3/18/88 - ACT TWO 18.
ACT TWO
FADE IN:
26 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL)
moving at warp speed.
27 INT. SICKBAY
It is as we left it. Picard, Data and Worf watch as
Beverly wakes them all up, we get to "meet" each of
the guests. They are still covered only in sheets.
DATA
I was able to retrieve some
information from the ancient disk
I removed from the module's
computer. Based on that...
28 NUMBER ONE
She re-awakens the woman.
DATA
Her name is Clare Raymond, age
thirty-five; occupation,
homemaker... must be some kind
of construction work.
BEVERLY
She died of an embolism. It
probably happened very suddenly,
otherwise her physical condition
was excellent.
CLARE RAYMOND is handsome, not pretty. A solid,
no-nonsense person. This time she stays awake, as she
takes in the room, everything and everyone in it.
They move to:
29 NUMBER TWO
As the nurse (Nurse Wright) awakens him:
DATA
His name is Ralph Offenhouse, age
sixty-three; occupation,
financier.
STAR TREK: "... Neutral... " - REV. 3/18/88 - ACT TWO 19.
29 CONTINUED:
BEVERLY
Advanced cardiomyopathy,
inoperable at the time, but easily
correctable now. He must have
known for some time his condition
was terminal.
RALPH OFFENHOUSE was a power broker on both coasts
who came up hard -- is used to being absolutely in
charge. He too, is disoriented -- confused -- unsure.
They MOVE to the last:
30 NUMBER THREE
DATA
Much of his file could not be
retrieved. His name is L. Q.
"Sonny" Clemonds. Apparently his
occupation had something to do
with music.
BEVERLY
There was marked deterioration
of every system in his body.
Probably due to massive chemical
abuse. Unbelievable.
L. Q. "SONNY" CLEMONDS has a lot of miles on his
forty-seven years. He's passed his time with booze
and drugs, and covered up the wear and tear with
cosmetic surgery. His attention span is about
twenty-eight seconds.
PICARD
That sounds like someone who hated
life -- yet he had himself frozen
so presumably he could go through
it all again.
BEVERLY
Fear. Too afraid to live... too
scared to die.
PICARD
Doctor, this seems to be a
situation more suited to your
talents. I will leave it in your
hands.
With a nod to Data to join him:
PICARD
(continuing)
I'll be on the bridge.
STAR TREK: "... Neutral... " - REV. 3/21/88 - ACT TWO 20.
30 CONTINUED:
He is satisfied that they do not represent a clear and
present danger to the Enterprise.
Picard and Data EXIT.
A31 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE
a flyby.
31 INT. SICKBAY
The three humans are finishing dressing.
BEVERLY
I know you have a lot of
questions, but I would like you
to wait. You are feeling a
certain amount of disorientation.
In a little while it should pass;
then we can fully discuss what
has happened. Nurse Wright will
furnish you with anything you
need.
RALPH
Not so fast. Is this part of the
service or is it extra?
BEVERLY
I think it would be best if...
RALPH
I demand to know the cost of
anything you do before the
procedure is approved.
BEVERLY
I have no idea what you're talking
about.
(then, mostly for the
others)
Just take it slowly. Everything
is fine. Worf, would you show
them to the guest quarters.
WORF
This way.
32 INT. MAIN BRIDGE
Picard and Data ENTER and CROSS to the Command
Position.
STAR TREK: "... Neutral... " - REV. 3/18/88 - ACT TWO 21.
32 CONTINUED:
PICARD
(to Riker)
Number One, kindly take charge
of our guests until we have time
to decide what we are going to do
with them.
RIKER
Aye, sir.
PICARD
... and keep them out of my way.
Riker rises to leave.
DATA
(requesting to join
Riker)
Sir?
Picard nods as Data EXITS with Riker.
33 INT. GUEST LOUNGE (OPTICAL)
They are all sitting -- unsure of themselves.
RIKER
I know this is all very confusing
to you so I'll attempt to
explain. First -- you are on the
starship -- USS Enterprise.
RALPH
American?
RIKER
No -- we are a vessel of the United
Federation of Planets. Earth is
a member.
RALPH
What year is this?
DATA
By your calendar... two thousand
three hundred sixty-four.
STAR TREK: "The Neutral Zone" - 3/17/88 - ACT TWO 22.
33 CONTINUED:
RALPH
(very excited)
What?
(then, holding back)
My heart? Is it...
BEVERLY
It's perfectly fine. In fact,
you are all now in excellent
health.
RALPH
I made it... It worked. I never
believed this was...
SONNY
(pointing to Data)
What's that?
RIKER
An android.
SONNY
You mean a robot?
DATA
Actually there is a distinct
difference between a robot and
an android.
CLARE
And him? The one I saw before
with the... head.
Riker is confused.
BEVERLY
She means Worf.
RIKER
Oh, he's a Klingon, and that
requires a little more
explanation.
SONNY
Guys... listen. I paid some idiot
a lot of money to freeze me when
I died. I need to hear the
words... Am I alive?
RIKER
Oh, yes... absolutely.
STAR TREK: "... Neutral... " - REV. 3/18/88 - ACT TWO 23.
33 CONTINUED: (2)
SONNY
And the liver that was about to
explode in my face.
BEVERLY
Perfectly sound.
SONNY
Great...
CLARE
(who has remained
confused through it
all)
Excuse me. Would someone tell
me what's going on?
BEVERLY
Well... About three hundred and
seventy years ago you died of a
massive embolism.
CLARE
I don't remember anything about
it.
BEVERLY
You and the others were frozen.
SONNY
Cryonics -- you know... freeze you
now... heal you later.
CLARE
I've heard about it; I just never
paid it much mind. How did we
get here?
DATA
Why were you in a module?
SONNY
The whacko who sold me this scam
said that by putting us in orbit
there would be no chance of brown
out.
STAR TREK: "The Neutral Zone" - 3/17/88 - ACT TWO 24.
33 CONTINUED: (3)
RALPH
Several cryonics companies had
fallen into disrepute because of
power failures which adversely
affected their refrigeration
system. Their stocks were
severely depressed.
SONNY
The whole deal was a long shot...
but I figured... what the hell,
might as well give them the dough
instead of leaving it to my
ex-wives.
(to Data)
But you know, son, I figured it
was just so much hooey.
DATA
Hooey? Accessing.
(pause)
Ah, as in malarkey... jive...
bull... hogwash... an
intentional fabrication.
SONNY
There you go, now you got it.
RIKER
(to Clare)
If you didn't contract for this,
who did?
CLARE
It must have been Donald -- my
husband. If it was new and
foolish, he'd have popped for it.
Well, I'll say this. It's the
first thing he ever bought into
that worked.
RALPH
I, for one, never had a doubt.
My stock in this company must have
split a dozen times by now.
DATA
Actually the process of cryonics
was never more than a fad, and
did not continue much beyond the
mid-twenty-first century.
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33 CONTINUED: (4)
RALPH
I need to make a phone call as
soon as possible.
RIKER
A phone call?
RALPH
I have provided for myself. I
have a substantial portfolio.
It's critical I check on it. Let
the bank know that I am alive and
well.
RIKER
That's ah... going to be a little
difficult right at the moment.
RALPH
Do you at least have a copy of The
Wall Street Journal?
RIKER
I think we should take the
doctor's advice and go slowly.
Get adjusted to your new... ah...
whatever, and then we'll talk to
the captain.
33A INT. MAIN BRIDGE
Troi takes her seat beside Picard.
TROI
As you know, there is very little
available on the Romulans
PICARD
Anything will help.
STAR TREK: "... Neutral... " - REV. 3/24/88 - ACT TWO 26.
33A CONTINUED:
TROI
They seem to be creatures of
extremes. One moment violent
beyond description, the next --
tender. They're related to the
Vulcans but as each developed,
their differences grew wider.
They are intensely curious. Their
belief in their own superiority
is beyond arrogance. For some
reason they have exhibited a
fascination with humans and that
fascination, more than anything
else, has kept the peace. One
other thing, they will not
initiate. They will wait for
you to commit yourself.
PICARD
(to himself)
Counterpunches...
(to Troi)
Thank you, Counselor. This is
quite helpful.
OFF Picard's pensiveness:
33B INT. GUEST LOUNGE
Sonny, feeling more at ease by the moment, rises,
stretches muscles unused for centuries.
SONNY
I don't know about you all... but
me -- I'm going to find the bar.
After all of this -- I need me a
drink.
RIKER
There is nothing of that nature
on board the Enterprise.
SONNY
No bars?! Don't tell me that,
son. Well, where's the
restaurant? I'm so hungry.
RIKER
We have food stations.
(he indicates the
computer)
Simply tell the computer what you
want and it will be provided.
STAR TREK: "... Neutral... " - REV. 3/21/88 - ACT TWO 27.
33B CONTINUED:
SONNY
Where do you eat it?
RIKER
Why... here... or anywhere. We're
not that structured.
Sonny walks over to the computer.
SONNY
Now what?
DATA
Talk.
SONNY
I'd like me a thick Kansas City
steak - country fried potatoes
-- a mess of greens -- and... Oh,
hell... forget all of that. Let
me have a martini - -straight up...
two olives.
(he winks at Data)
... for the vitamins.
The drink is provided. He takes a sip and rears back
surprised.
DATA
Is there something wrong?
SONNY
Wrong? Only that your computer
here fixed just about the best
martini I have ever had.
(with a nod to Data)
I just might get to like this
place. Let's see if the Braves
are on. How do you turn on this
here teevee?
STAR TREK: "... Neutral... " - REV. 3/22/88 - ACT TWO 28.
33B CONTINUED: (2)
RIKER
Teevee?
SONNY
Yeah, boob-tube... you know. I'd
like to find out how the Braves
are doin' after all this time.
Probably still finding ways to
lose.
DATA
(to Riker)
Oh -- I think he means television,
sir.
SONNY
Or maybe catch up on the soaps.
DATA
(to Sonny)
That particular form of entertainment
did not last much beyond the year
Two Thousand Forty.
SONNY
So, what do you guys do? I mean,
you don't drink -- no teevee -- kind
of boring, isn't it?
Data is at a loss of words
PICARD'S COM VOICE
Number One.
Riker steps over to the com panel.
RIKER
Riker here.
PICARD
Would you and Mister Data report
to the bridge?
RIKER
On the way.
RALPH
With whom were you speaking?
RIKER
The captain.
RALPH
Ah... good. Tell him I would like
to see him as soon as it's
convenient.
STAR TREK: "... Neutral... " - REV. 3/21/88 - ACT TWO 29.
33B CONTINUED: (3)
CLARE
What is going to happen to us?
Do we stay here with you? Do we
go back to Earth?
Riker does not have an immediate answer.
RIKER
That will be up to the captain.
RALPH
Well, get him in here. I have
to phone Geneva right away about
my accounts. The interest alone
could be enough to buy even this
ship.
SONNY
The Yankee's right. Let's get
the big boy in here.
RIKER
(smiles)
I'll pass on your request. Now,
if you'll excuse us.
SONNY
Duty calls -- hey, I understand...
(then, to Data)
... come back later -- you and me
can find us a couple of
low-mileage pit woffies, and help
them build a memory.
Riker and Data EXIT.
34 INT. CORRIDOR
as they walk away.
DATA
What is to be done with them?
RIKER
I don't know.
DATA
Commander. What is a
"low-mileage-pit-woffie"?
RIKER
This time you have me, Data. I
haven't a clue.
STAR TREK: "The Neutral Zone" - 3/17/88 - ACT TWO 30.
34 CONTINUED:
DATA
These are not like any other
humans I have ever encountered.
I find them fascinating.
RIKER
From what I have already seen
of our "guests", there is very
little to redeem them. In fact,
it makes me wonder, how our
species ever survived the
twenty-first century.
OFF Data's REACTION:
FADE OUT.
END OF ACT TWO
STAR TREK: "... Neutral... " - REV. 3/18/88 - ACT THREE 31.
ACT THREE
FADE IN:
35 INT. CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM
The staff meeting is reassembled.
PICARD
Report.
WORF
We are six hours from the Neutral
Zone. I have been unable to
establish communications with any
Federation colony or station in
this vicinity.
PICARD
How many outposts are there in
this sector?
WORF
Nine.
RIKER
I think we should go on the
presumption that they've all
been destroyed.
GEORDI
By the Romulans?
RIKER
It fits their historical pattern.
Picard is very thoughtful.
DATA
Since there has been no contact
with the Romulans for fifty-three
years, seven months, eighteen
days, we must consider that the
information we do have, is out
of date.
STAR TREK: "... Neutral... " - REV. 3/22/88 - ACT THREE 32.
35 CONTINUED:
RIKER
The positive side of that is their
information about us is also out
of date. Captain, I believe that
lack of information is what this
is all about.
PICARD
Continue, Number One.
RIKER
In my opinion, the Romulans want
a confrontation... specifically
against us.
PICARD
The Enterprise?
RIKER
Not by name; but yes, against us.
They know the Federation will send
their best -- this will be a
perfect chance for them to learn
firsthand, how much we have
advanced in both technology, and
technique.
PICARD
And your recommendation.
RIKER
I don't know if I have a specific
recommendation. Perhaps we should
consider taking the initiative.
WORF
I agree with Commander Riker.
We may only have one opportunity;
we should seize it.
PICARD
Data.
DATA
That strategy is built on a single
premise. The hostile intent of
the Romulans. If the premise is
sound, so is the proposal.
GEORDI
If their intention isn't hostile,
what is it?
RALPH'S COM VOICE
Captain Picard?
STAR TREK: "The Neutral Zone" - 3/17/88 - ACT THREE 33.
35 CONTINUED: (2)
Surprised at the interruption.
PICARD
This is the captain, to whom am
I speaking?
RALPH'S COM VOICE
Ralph Offenhouse. Captain, I need
to talk to you.
PICARD
What's going on here, Number One?
Did you give him permission to
contact me?
RIKER
No, sir. He must have seen me
use the com panel.
Picard nods his understanding.
PICARD
Listen, Mister Offenhouse. We
are in a very important conference
right now and...
RALPH'S COM VOICE
I am sick and tired of being put
off by you and your staff. This
is the worst run ship I have ever
been on. You could take some
lessons from the Q-E Two. Now
that's an efficient operation.
Picard mutes the intercom.
PICARD
Data -- identify -- what's the
Q-E-Two?
DATA
It was a passenger liner which
mostly traveled Earth's Atlantic
Ocean during the late twentieth
and early twenty-first centuries.
PICARD
He's comparing the Enterprise to
a cruise ship.
RALPH'S COM VOICE
I demand you see me.
Picard is nonplussed.
STAR TREK: "The Neutral Zone" - 3/17/88 - ACT THREE 34.
36 INT. GUEST LOUNGE
Ralph by the com panel, still going on. The other two,
Clare and Sonny are off to one side, watching. Sonny
is slightly amused -- Clare still appears to be
disoriented.
RALPH
... I think I have been very, very
patient, especially under the
circumstances and considering what
I paid for this procedure, but
frankly enough is enough. I
demand a phone, or a radio
whatever you have. I must contact
my...
The doors OPEN and Picard STRIDES IN.
RALPH
(continuing; off balance
for a beat)
...lawyers.
PICARD
I am Captain Picard.
Ralph composes himself quickly.
RALPH
Excellent.
He steps forward with his hand out.
RALPH
(continuing)
Now, we'll be able to get some
things straight.
PICARD
Indeed we will. Those com panels
are for official ship business.
RALPH
If they are so important, why
don't they need an "executive
key"?
PICARD
Aboard a starship, that is not
necessary. We are all capable
of exercising self-control. You
will refrain from using them.
STAR TREK: "... Neutral... " - REV. 3/24/88 - ACT THREE 35.
36 CONTINUED:
RALPH
Now just a minute.
PICARD
We are involved in a
very serious and potentially
dangerous situation.
RALPH
I'm sure that whatever it is seems
very important to you. My
situation is far more critical.
PICARD
I do not think you are fully aware
of your situation, or the time
which has passed.
RALPH
Believe me, I'm fully cognizant
of where I am, and when. It is
simply that I have more to protect
than a man in your position could
possibly imagine. No offense,
but a military career has never
been considered upwardly mobile.
I must contact my lawyer.
PICARD
Your lawyer has been dead for
centuries.
RALPH
Yes, of course I know that, but
he was a full partner with a very
important firm. Rest assured the
firm is still operating.
PICARD
That's what this is all about...
A lot has changed in three hundred
years. People are no longer
obsessed with the accumulation of
"things". We have eliminated hunger,
want, the need for possessions.
We have grown out of our infancy.
RALPH
You've got it wrong. It's never
been about "possessions" - it's
about power.
STAR TREK: "The Neutral Zone" - 3/17/88 - ACT THREE 36.
36 CONTINUED: (2)
PICARD
Power to do what?
RALPH
To control your life, your
destiny.
PICARD
That kind of control is an
illusion.
RALPH
Really -- I'm here aren't I? I
should be dead and I'm not.
That's what money did for me.
That's the kind of power I'm
talking about.
Off to the side, Clare begins softly weeping.
PICARD
(turning to her)
What is it?
CLARE
I don't know. It just started
and I can't stop. I keep
thinking about my boys.
He steps over to the com panel.
PICARD
Counselor Troi, report to the
guest lounge.
RIKER'S COM VOICE
Captain, we are approaching
Science Station Delta Zero-Five.
PICARD
Slow to impulse... I'm on my way.
Picard moves toward the exit.
SONNY
Say, Captain -- I need to see that
pretty Doctor of yours.
PICARD
I will inform her.
STAR TREK: "... Neutral... " - REV. 3/18/88 - ACT THREE 37.
36 CONTINUED: (3)
Ralph puts his hand on Picard's arm. (His way to
control the situation.)
RALPH
Captain. I didn't mean to come
on so strong. I've built my life
on knowing what's going on. For
the first time -- I'm completely
out of touch -- it makes me crazy.
Can you understand?
PICARD
It's the first thing you've said
that I do understand. I'll see
what I can do. But please... stay
off the com panel.
Ralph nods as Picard EXITS.
37 INT. CORRIDOR
as Picard and Troi meet.
PICARD
Counselor, get those people under
control. We cannot afford this
continuing distraction.
TROI
Yes, sir.
38 INT. CLARE'S QUARTERS
Troi ENTERS.
TROI
Hello -- my name is Deanna.
CLARE
They sent you here to settle me
down.
TROI
I'm the ship's counselor and I
thought you might want to talk.
CLARE
The local shrink.
STAR TREK: "The Neutral Zone" - 3/17/88 - ACT THREE 38.
38 CONTINUED:
TROI
I'm sorry, I do not know that
term.
CLARE
It doesn't matter.
TROI
You are feeling profoundly sad.
CLARE
Can't stop crying. I miss my
sons, and then I think... I'm
here, but they are gone. Donald
-- he's my husband. I love that
man but, good intentions aside,
he'd mess up a free lunch. Why
in the world he ever decided to
do this...
TROI
He must have thought you would
have wanted it.
CLARE
I can tell you exactly what
happened. He couldn't think about
going on alone. I died, but he
couldn't face it. So he figured
if he had me frozen, then in his
mind I wasn't really gone. Crazy,
huh? But you have to know Donald.
She pauses a minute -- turns away and fights back the
tears that will not stop.
CLARE
(continuing)
I'm in a world of strangers. I
wish I knew what happened to my
children. Did they get married,
did they have kids...
TROI
Let's see if we can find out.
Troi goes to a computer screen.
STAR TREK: "... Neutral... " - REV. 3/21/88 - ACT THREE 39.
38 CONTINUED: (2)
TROI
(continuing)
Computer - this is Counselor Troi.
Request personal history on...
What are their names?
CLARE
Tommy -- he's eight, and Eddie's
five.
COMPUTER VOICE
Full names -- Date and place of
birth.
CLARE
They were born in Secaucus -
that's in Jersey.
(to Troi)
Can this really work? Can this
tell me what happened to them?
TROI
There has to be a record
somewhere. There is a good chance
we can find it.
CLARE
Whether we do or not, thank you
for... trying.
(then, to computer)
Date of birth. Tommy was born
February seventeenth...
39 INT. SICKBAY
Beverly is there with Sonny.
SONNY
I just got to have a little
something to jump start the
morning -- and a little something
else to shut down the night.
BEVERLY
You have no medical need.
SONNY
It's not a question of "need,"
darlin'. It's a matter of
survival.
STAR TREK: "... Neutral... ' - REV. 3/21/88 - ACT THREE 40.
39 CONTINUED:
BEVERLY
Sorry.
SONNY
Not to worry -- ol' Watosh will
scuffle along the best way he can.
He turns to leave, then:
SONNY
(continuing)
How do I get a hold of the ol'
boy with the marinie face?
BEVERLY
I beg your pardon?
SONNY
What's his name... that android
fella.
BEVERLY
Lieutenant Commander Data?
SONNY
That's the one.
BEVERLY
I'll let him know you want to see
him.
He gets up to leave.
SONNY
Much obliged. You sure are the
prettiest little doctor I ever
saw.
And he walks toward the door.
BEVERLY
Much obliged.
40 INT. CLARE'S QUARTERS (OPTICAL)
Troi and Clare.
CLARE
Amazing. It's all right there.
STAR TREK: "... Neutral... " - REV. 3/21/88 - ACT THREE 40A.
40 CONTINUED:
TROI
Yes, ten generations of your
progeny.
CLARE
Everyone I ever knew is dead.
Would you mind... I'd like to be
alone.
STAR TREK: "... Neutral... " - REV. 3/21/88 - ACT THREE 41.
40 CONTINUED: (2)
TROI
No, not at all.
WE HOLD on Clare as Troi moves toward the exit.
40A INT. SONNY'S QUARTERS
Sonny looks up as Data ENTERS.
DATA
You asked to see me.
SONNY
I'm about to go out of my mind
for something to do. Sittin'
alone drinkin' don't get it. What
say you and me put together a
little party.
DATA
A celebration?
SONNY
Naw... nothin' that fancy -- just
some folks, some suds, and some
sounds. Hell it ain't nothin'
but somethin' to do. Whatdeya
think?
DATA
I will ask the captain.
SONNY
Great -- you do that...
DATA
Query. You do not seem to be
having as much difficulty
adjusting to your current
circumstances as are the others.
SONNY
You mean being here -- on this tub
-- four hundred years from where
I started? Heck -- it's the same
dance, just a different tune.
You think anyone 'round here's
got a guitar I could borrow?
STAR TREK: "The Neutral Zone" - 3/17/88 - ACT THREE 42.
40A CONTINUED:
DATA
No, but the computer can replicate
such an instrument.
SONNY
I was kind of hopin' to get one
while I still remember the chords.
RIKER'S COM VOICE
Commander Data -- we are
approaching the Neutral Zone.
Report to the bridge.
DATA
I must leave.
Data walks toward the door.
SONNY
What's this "Neutral Zone?"
DATA
A buffer between the Romulan
Empire and the Federation.
SONNY
Why does that make me nervous?
DATA
I do not know.
SONNY
We won't be inviting these
Romulans to our party, will we?
DATA
No, it would not be appropriate.
OFF Sonny's REACTION:
FADE OUT.
END OF ACT THREE
STAR TREK: "... Neutral... " - REV. 3/18/88 - ACT FOUR 43.
ACT FOUR
FADE IN:
41 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL)
travelling at impulse speed.
PICARD
Captain's log, supplemental. We
have arrived at the edge of the
Neutral Zone. We will now have
an opportunity to learn firsthand
what happened to our distant
outposts.
42 INT. MAIN BRIDGE
Data is at Science One.
DATA
There is nothing left of Outpost
Delta Zero-Five.
GEORDI
It must have been one hell of an
explosion.
DATA
Sensors indicate no evidence of
a conventional attack.
He turns to face Picard.
DATA
(continuing)
There is nothing left.
PICARD
Can you determine what happened?
OFF Picard's REACTION.
WORF
The outpost was not just
destroyed, it is as though some
great force just scooped it
off the face of the planet.
STAR TREK: "... Neutral... " - REV. 3/21/88 - ACT FOUR 44.
42 CONTINUED:
They continue scanning.
PICARD
Could it have been a natural
phenomenon?
DATA
Insufficient information.
PICARD
Geordi, set a course for the next
closest station.
GEORDI
Aye, sir.
43 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL)
as it files by.
43A INT. SONNY'S QUARTERS
WESLEY and Sonny. Sonny sits picking his guitar.
Wesley sits across from him, staring.
SONNY
I just can't believe this. When
that android fella said you could
duplicate this baby, I didn't
dream you'd do such a bang-up
job... You like country?
WESLEY
Excuse me?
SONNY
Picking and strummin', son. What
about rock?
WESLEY
What about rock?
SONNY
What's the matter, kid? You look
like you're staring at a ghost.
WESLEY
Well, sir, you were dead for over
three-hundred years...
STAR TREK: "... Neutral... " - REV. 3/22/88 - ACT FOUR 44A.
43A CONTINUED:
SONNY
How 'bout rhythm and blues? That
comes back every decade or so.
Wesley continues to stare. He could just as soon be
looking at a dinosaur.
WESLEY
What was it like?... I mean, can
you remember...
SONNY
What? Bein' dead? Not really,
but then again there wasn't a
whole lot happening.
WESLEY
Why did you do it? Was there
something left undone... something
you have to finish?
SONNY
Nope. Just curiosity... Another
adventure... Simply wanted to see
what was going on.
44 INT. MAIN BRIDGE
as they wait.
GEORDI
We are approaching Tarod Nine.
DATA
The condition is identical,
Captain.
WORF
Everyone and everything is gone.
RIKER
Captain, I strongly recommend that
we go to Red Alert. If the
Romulans have improved their
cloaking device, and we'd be fools
to think they haven't, we should
assume a more defensive posture.
WORF
I agree, Captain. I recommend
we go immediately to battle
stations.
Picard will not be pushed.
STAR TREK: "The Neutral Zone" - 3/17/88 - ACT FOUR 45.
44 CONTINUED:
PICARD
I appreciate your concern and
advice, but this is not the time
for rash actions. We are still
investigating.
He moves away from the Aft Station.
PICARD
(continuing)
There are three other stations
in this sector which we need to
visit. Let's proceed in a calm
and orderly manner.
RIKER
If not "battle stations," may I
at least bring the ship to Yellow
Alert?
Picard considers for a moment.
PICARD
Yes, Number One. That would be
prudent.
RIKER
Thank you.
And Riker initiates the necessary procedure to raise
the alert level of the Enterprise.
45 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL)
as it continues on.
46 INT. GUEST LOUNGE
Ralph, Sonny and Clare are together.
SONNY
So, what is it that you want?
RALPH
I've spent my career being able
to tell when the other guy's mouth
is dry. There is something going
on. Something serious. The
tension level on this ship has
jumped up.
STAR TREK: "... Neutral... " - REV. 3/21/88 - ACT FOUR 46.
46 CONTINUED:
SONNY
Even if you're right, what can
we do about it? And besides,
these old boys don't need us to
tell them where the bear sits.
He reaches down beside him and lifts up an acoustic
guitar...
SONNY
(continuing)
Lookie here what that young
fella made for me.
CLARE
How did he do that?
SONNY
He called it a pattern replication.
It plays real good, too.
And he hits a couple of chords.
RALPH
I'm trying to tell you that there
is a situation developing on this
vessel which affects us, and all
you can talk about is that stupid
guitar!
SONNY
These folks don't need us swimming
in their soup, so why don't you
just relax and let them do their
jobs?
RALPH
That may be all right for you,
but I am not willing to allow my
fate to be decided by others.
I at least want to know what is
going on.
SONNY
How are you planning to do that?
STAR TREK: "... Neutral... " - REV. 3/18/88 - ACT FOUR 47.
47 ANOTHER ANGLE - DOOR
Ralph gives Sonny a look and goes to the door. It
OPENS. There is a security guard standing there.
RALPH
He needs help. I think he's
dying.
As the security guard ENTERS the room and MOVES toward
Sonny, Ralph SLIPS UP behind him and hits him on the
head, knocking him unconscious.
SONNY
What the hell are you doing?
RALPH
I'm going to find out what's going
on.
47A INT. CORRIDOR (FORMERLY SCENE 48)
as Ralph moves along. Other crewmembers are moving
quickly about their business. Ralph is able to move
along unnoticed.
A48 ANOTHER ANGLE
As Ralph continues moving forward, he notices the
turbolift door OPEN and some Enterprise personnel EXIT.
He STEPS ONTO the turbolift. For a moment he is
confused; he knows it's an elevator, but he sees no
buttons. He looks around, then to himself:
RALPH
Ah... let's see.
(to computer)
Ah... I want to go to a... the...
ah...
(he shrugs; then to
himself:)
Where would the captain be?
To his astonishemnt, the computer answers:
COMPUTER VOICE
Captain Picard is located on the
Main Bridge.
RALPH
Then, take me to the Main Bridge.
The doors CLOSE. The turbolift streaks off.
STAR TREK: "... Neutral... " - REV. 3/21/88 - ACT FOUR 47A.
B48 OMITTED
48 OMITTED
48A INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL)
at Yellow Alert.
WORF
Captain, my sensors indicate a
disturbance. It is large and
moving, but I cannot get a
positive lock nor can I get it
on the viewscreen.
RIKER
Shields up.
WORF
Aye, sir.
RIKER
Captain, I recommend we transfer
all power to phasers, and arm the
photon torpedos.
PICARD
Wait. If that is a Romulan ship,
it will read our intent. We will
be forcing them to take a similar
posture. We are not out here to
engage in battles; we are explorers.
RIKER
Captain, there is sufficient
evidence. Outposts have been
destroyed... Countless lives have
been lost.
STAR TREK: "... Neutral... " - REV. 3/18/88 - ACT FOUR 48.
48A CONTINUED:
WORF
I have a positive lock... It's
disengaging its cloaking device.
RIKER
They are vulnerable for an instant
as they become visible.
WORF
Captain, this may be our only
chance.
While they are all intent on the Main Viewer, the
turbolift doors OPEN and Ralph STEPS ONTO the bridge.
The size of the room and the near visible tension stops
him momentarily in his tracks.
WORF
(continuing)
I've lost them.
PICARD
(to Data)
Are your sensors picking up
anything? You should be
detecting a disturbance.
DATA
Negative.
GEORDI
We wanted to know if they have
improved their cloaking device
-- I guess we have our answer.
PICARD
(to Riker)
They were trying to determine
our intent... They wanted to see
if we would fire.
RALPH
Who the hell are they?
Everyone turns.
RIKER
Get that man off the bridge...
now.
Security moves toward him.
STAR TREK: "... Neutral... " - REV. 3/18/88 - ACT FOUR 49.
48A CONTINUED: (2)
RALPH
I'm not going anywhere.
WORF
Captain, they're back.
Everyone is looking at Picard.
PICARD
On screen.
49
thru OMITTED
51
51A ANOTHER ANGLE FAVORING SCREEN
as a disturbance becomes a Romulan cruiser.
REACTIONS:
51B EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL)
(FORMERLY SC. 50)
in proximity to the Romulan cruiser.
FADE OUT.
END OF ACT FOUR
STAR TREK: "... Neutral... " - REV. 3/21/88 - ACT FIVE 50.
ACT FIVE
FADE IN:
52 EXT. SPACE - THE ROMULAN CRUISER (OPTICAL)
as it closes in on the Enterprise.
53 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL)
It's as it was. Worf and a couple of other crewmembers
move toward Ralph.
RIKER
Amazing. I never thought I would
ever see a Romulan ship -- not this
close.
GEORDI
The last encounter was decades
ago and cost thousands of lives.
A REACTION from Ralph.
RALPH
(awed)
I can believe that.
It's said so quietly, and the thought is so much on
everyone's mind, that no one notices it was Ralph who
said it.
PICARD
Stay calm, everyone.
WORF
Captain, these are Romulans -- they
are without honor. They killed
my parents in an attack on
Khitomer at a time when they were
supposed to be our allies. They
believe humans and Klingons are
a waste of skin, so inferior as
to be unworthy of any
consideration.
PICARD
Lieutenant, keep your emotions
under control. Open hailing
frequencies.
STAR TREK: "... Neutral... " - REV. 3/21/88 - ACT FIVE 50A.
53 CONTINUED:
WORF
Hailing frequencies open.
PICARD
Romulan vessel, this is Captain
Jean-Luc Picard of the USS
Enterprise.
There is no response.
STAR TREK: "... Neutral... " - REV. 3/21/88 - ACT FIVE 51.
53 CONTINUED: (2)
DATA
Sensors indicate all of their
systems are armed.
PICARD
But they have not fired.
Picard thinks for a beat.
PICARD
(continuing)
Let's try them again.
WORF
Hailing frequencies are still
open.
PICARD
Romulan vessel, this is Captain
Jean-Luc Picard of the USS
Enterprise.
There is a pause.
54 MAIN VIEWSCREEN (OPTICAL) (INTERCUT AS NECESSARY)
Then the interior of the Romulan vessel COMES ON the
viewscreen.
STAR TREK: "... Neutral... " - REV. 3/18/88 - ACT FIVE 52.
54 CONTINUED:
There are TWO ROMULAN OFFICERS in the Control area.
COMMANDER TEBOK (pronounced "TAY-bok") and
SUB-COMMANDER THEI (pronounced "TIE").
TEBOK
I am Commander Tebok.
PICARD
You have crossed the Neutral Zone.
This is Federation territory.
THEI
It was necessary.
PICARD
It could be viewed as an act of
aggression.
THEI
If our intent was aggression,
you would not now be here.
TEBOK
If we go to war, let us be sure
it is for the right reason. We
are here because our outposts,
which border the Neutral Zone,
were also attacked.
THEI
Destroyed in the exact same manner
as your own.
WORF
(to Picard)
What right did they have to enter
Federation space?
TEBOK
Silence your dog, Captain.
PICARD
Lieutenant Worf's question is
valid.
THEI
Even to ask such a question
implies that we need permission;
we do not.
PICARD
Do you think we attacked your
outposts?
STAR TREK: "... Neutral... " - REV. 3/21/88 - ACT FIVE 53.
54 CONTINUED: (2)
TEBOK
(with disdain)
Once we realized the level of
destruction, we knew it could not
have been you.
PICARD
Who is responsible?
There is a pause.
RALPH
They haven't a clue.
Picard shoots Ralph a look.
RALPH
(continuing)
They're hoping you know, but
they're too arrogant to ask.
RIKER
You're out of line, Mister.
PICARD
Yes, but correct in his
assessment.
TEBOK
We do not know who is
responsible... Why entire
outposts on both sides were
carried off.
PICARD
I would like to offer a proposal.
THEI
(with a smile)
An alliance? Between the
Romulans and the Federation?
PICARD
Nothing so grandiose -- just this.
Cooperation... whoever or whatever
did this is more powerful than
either of us.
STAR TREK: "... Neutral... " - REV. 3/21/88 - ACT FIVE 53A.
54 CONTINUED: (3)
The two Romulans ponder for a moment.
THEI
Agreed.
STAR TREK: "... Neutral... " - REV. 3/21/88 - ACT FIVE 54.
54 CONTINUED: (4)
THEI
On this one issue, and only if
it is convenient and something
we consider appropriate at the
time.
TEBOK
Captain Picard, because your
actions are those of a thoughtful
man who is neither rash nor easily
provoked, I tell you this. More
urgent matters have caused our
absence, and witness the results.
Outposts destroyed, evidence of
the Federation everywhere. We
have been negligent, but no more.
PICARD
We have made some progress in our
relations... let's not ruin that
with unnecessary posturing.
TEBOK
Your presence is not wanted. Do
you understand my meaning? We
are back!
The Romulans study Picard for a beat; then -- without a
signal or a sign, they CLICK OFF. The image on the
Main Viewer is REPLACED with a SHOT of the Romulan
cruiser.
PICARD
I think our lives just became a
lot more complicated.
55 ANOTHER ANGLE
as the members of the bridge crew breath a collective
sigh of relief.
56 EXT. SPACE - THE ROMULAN CRUISER (OPTICAL)
as it TURNS and LEAVES at high speed.
56A INT. MAIN BRIDGE
as before. Picard turns slowly to Worf.
PICARD
Get him off my bridge.
STAR TREK: "... Neutral... " - REV. 3/21/88 - ACT FIVE 54A.
56B INT. CLARE'S QUARTERS (FORMERLY SC. 58) (OPTICAL)
Troi and Clare are there.
TROI
I have found something.
Clare comes over to the computer next to Troi. On the
screen is the biographical information of:
TROI
(continuing)
I have been able to locate a
family living outside of
Indianapolis. The man's name is
Thomas Raymond.
Clare looks at the Screen.
CLARE
That's my son's name. My son's
name is Tommy.
STAR TREK: "... Neutral... " - REV. 3/18/88 - ACT FIVE 55.
56B CONTINUED: (2)
The READOUT on the screen indicates that Thomas Raymond
is married and has two children, ages four and seven.
TROI
Computer -- let us see Thomas
Raymond.
And the screen REPAINTS with a semi-line drawing of
a man around thirty.
CLARE
Oh, my God... It's Donald...
that's my husband.
TROI
Actually, it's your great, great,
great, great, great grandson.
CLARE
He's the spitting image.
TROI
I have his address. When you get
back to Earth, you could go and
see him.
CLARE
But... I will still be out of
time. A relic.
TROI
Perhaps. But it's a place to
start. He is after all, family.
Clare looks at the picture on the Screen.
CLARE
There's no denying that.
For the first time since she was thawed, her attitude
brightens.
57 INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE
Picard and other members of the crew are with the
"guests."
PICARD
Here is what I propose. You can't
remain on the Enterprise. We have
arranged to rendezvous with the
USS Charleston, bound for Earth.
You will be delivered there.
STAR TREK: "... Neutral... " - REV. 3/21/88 - ACT FIVE 56.
57 CONTINUED:
RALPH
And then what will happen to us?
There's no trace of my money -- my
office is gone -- what will I do?
How will I live?
PICARD
(amused)
This is the twenty-fourth century.
Those material needs no longer
exist.
RALPH
Then what's the challenge?
PICARD
To improve yourself... enrich
yourself. Enjoy it, Mister Offenhouse.
SONNY
Well, one good thing -- since
everybody's forgotten everything
I ever did... it'll all be brand
spankin' new. Hell, I'll be a
bigger hit than I ever was.
PICARD
Perhaps so, anything is possible.
SONNY
(to Data)
What say, son -- you'd make a hell
of a sideman.
DATA
That offer does present a certain
fascination.
58 OMITTED
59 INT. MAIN BRIDGE
Picard and Riker EXIT from the turbolift.
GEORDI
I have plotted a course to
intercept the Charleston, sir,
but they have informed me that
they will be making an extended
stop at Arloff Nine.
STAR TREK: "... Neutral... " - REV. 3/22/88 - ACT FIVE 57.
59 CONTINUED:
PICARD
Your point, Lieutenant?
GEORDI
At warp eight, we could have
our guests at Starbase Thirty-Nine
Sierra in five days. It
would cut months off their
journey.
PICARD
They will benefit from the
extended time. It will allow
them to acclimate before arriving
at Earth.
RIKER
It's a pity we can't take them
ourselves. Having them on board
has been like a visit from the
past.
PICARD
That would take us in the wrong
direction. Our mission is to go
forward and it has just begun.
Set velocity at warp six, Mister
La Forge.
GEORDI
Aye, sir... warp six.
PICARD
There is still much to do... and
still so much to learn.
(pause)
Mister La Forge... Engage.
60 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL)
as it heads off.
FADE OUT.
END OF ACT FIVE
THE END