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[Long, swooping shot over a Stargate orbiting a blue and white planet
with a quick cut to a foggy night in a village lit by what might be
torches, if they were flickering. Sheppard's team walks single
file
down a village lane, looking alert. Sheppard's on point, followed
by
Teyla, McKay and Dex. Shep and Teyla have their firearms at the
ready.]
SHEPPARD: Great vacation getaway in the Pegasus Galaxy.
TEYLA: Where is everyone?
DEX: There's smoke from the chimneys. They're inside.
McKAY: Hmph. Can't say I blame them. Nothing I hate more than a
damp
cold.
[The team arrives at a village square. They spread out in a semi-
circle, still looking about alertly. Sheppard heads for one of the
larger, better built structures that has an iron-bound door.]
SHEPPARD: Let's check this out.
[Door opens to a candle and firelit village tavern. It looks more
like dinnertime than happy hour, though. Folks do not look happy to
be disturbed, especially by strangers. Not a smiling face in the
bunch as everyone in the tavern turns to stare and all conversation
comes to a stop.]
SHEPPARD: Howdy, folks.
[More silence, more stares. A younger guy we saw serving dinner as
Sheppard and the others entered steps into view.]
CALLUP: Who are you?
SHEPPARD: Sheppard. [Gestures to the others as they come through the
door behind him.] This is Teyla, Ronon, McKay...
[Dex gives a brief, abortive wave to the crowd. No one responds.
While not hostile, it's clear they'd be just as happy if the
strangers turned around and left the way they came.]
CALLUP: [tossing a towel over his shoulder] You from Ratira?
[Sheppard exchanges a look over his shoulder with McKay, who has
stayed behind the armed members of the team since they all arrived in
the village square.]
SHEPPARD: No.
CALLUP: Over the mountains, then?
SHEPPARD: A little further.
CALLUP: Huh. Then you've come a long way. You'll be in need
of food
and drink.
[McKay looks interested. The camera switches to a view of the tavern
over his shoulder and Callup gestures offscreen.]
CALLUP: Sit.
[The team moves in the direction indicated, everyone in the tavern
still staring at them in silence. As he closes the tavern door and
follows the team to their table, Dex is obviously surveying the room
for threats. Cut to Callup brushing off a table and pulling an extra
chair over as Sheppard and Teyla take their seats.]
McKAY: [gesturing to the staring guests] I take it you don't get
a
lot of strangers around here?
CALLUP: No. [he nearly collides with Dex, who is a *lot* bigger, and
pulls out a bench for Dex to sit on.] Especially those who travel
near dark.
SHEPPARD: Why's that?
CALLUP: [looks up in real surprise from wiping down their table] You
really don't know?
OFFSCREEN MALE VOICE: Callup! [swing around shot to an older, bearded
man standing near the bar, arms crossed in more obvious hostility.]
What's your business here?
SHEPPARD: [turning up the charm a little] No business really,
we're
just travelers.
GORAN: [clearly not charmed] You'd best keep traveling, then.
[Pan across the team. Teyla looks surprised at this lapse in
hospitality; McKay, whose charming smile was turned up even higher
than Sheppard's, fades to his usual cynical look.]
McKAY: Yeah.
[Pan back to Goran, who wasn't kidding. The team all exchange
looks
and make as if to rise.]
SHEPPARD: All right, then.
CALLUP: Wait! [turns to Goran] Goran, you can't send them out
there.
[Goran looks over his shoulder at Dex, who never actually stood up
from the table and who is now looking dangerously bland.]
GORAN: They look like they can take care of themselves. [Cut to
Sheppard, looking a little crushed and confused, then back to Goran
and Callup.] It may not even start tonight.
CALLUP: It's been three months. How much longer do you think
it'll
wait?
[We can see McKay over his shoulder, looking first toward Sheppard
then back at Callup, curiosity getting the better of him about things
starting. He gives a little wave.]
McKAY: Hi! What are you talkin' about?
[Callup looks back at them, again not really crediting their
ignorance, and Goran approaches their table.]
GORAN: The Daimos.
[Quick camera cut between Teyla and Sheppard, both of whom look
puzzled.]
SHEPPARD: Never heard of it.
GORAN: It lives in the forest. It'll be feeding soon.
McKAY: And it is... some kind of an animal, or…?
GORAN: It's a creature, that has the appearance of a man, but it
can
suck the very life from your bones. It leaves only a dead, withered
husk behind.
SHEPPARD: Sounds familiar.
[Sheppard and Dex exchange resigned looks, cut to titles.]
[We return to the village tavern. The team is re-seated at the table
with Goran joining them, Callup serving drinks in the form of a clear
red beverage in tumblers and nobody staring anymore.]
SHEPPARD: Look, uh... we know you're not used to dealing with
strangers, but we may be able to help you with this little problem
you're having. We're used to dealing with this kind of thing.
[Quick cut to McKay, sniffing the reddish beverage suspiciously
before discreetly putting it back down, then to Dex, downing the same
drink in one gulp.]
TEYLA: We call them the Wraith.
GORAN: They're the creatures from the old stories, from the time
of
the cullings.
McKAY: So you have heard of them?
GORAN: Yes, but the histories of them are incomplete. They tell of
the great ships that descended from the sky, but there's no
description of the Wraith themselves, although there were a few among
us who guessed the Daimos might be one of them.
TEYLA: Why?
GORAN: Because it, too, came from the sky.
[Hissy flashback music, and we're looking at the village in misty
daylight. People are going about their business.]
GORAN: It was about ten years ago.
[The sound of a ship falling rapidly through atmosphere starts
attracting attention among the villagers.]
GORAN: A bright light appeared above the village. [Pan to falling
ship, which shows as a meteor-like bright object with a dark smoke
trail.] It crashed in the hills. We didn't know what it was. My
people were terrified.
[Pan ends back in the village square as we hear the loud crash.
Villagers are startled, running around, issuing each other
instructions and asking questions no one can answer. Quick cut to
some of the men walking quickly through the woods, armed with long
wooden sticks.]
GORAN: I went with some of the other men to investigate. We found the
wreckage, [pan down to a Wraith pinned under the debris and
struggling] a few wounded survivors. We didn't know what they
were.
We decided to take no chances.
[Short, slo-mo montage of villagers putting pitchforks, axes, hoes
and pointy sticks to good use on the downed Wraith, then cut to a
large bonfire surrounded by watchful villagers, not all of whom look
entirely happy with the proceedings.]
GORAN: We slaughtered them, burned the bodies.
[Quick cut back to the present evening.]
DEX: Wise decision.
GORAN: Unfortunately, we didn't get them all.
[Pan to McKay, looking horrified.]
GORAN: And although none of us saw it, evidently one of them survived.
[More hissy flashback music, and it's a different foggy night in
the
village. A group carrying lanterns and farm tools jogs quickly toward
the sound of a woman screaming. Pan down to a shriveled body on the
ground at her feet.]
GORAN: It took its first victim that very night. We tried to hunt it
down, but we couldn't find it. It's been out there ever since.
[Quick cut back to the present evening.]
GORAN: It feeds three, four times a year, takes two or three people
each time. [Cut to McKay having a very hard time hearing this.] Two
years after the first attack, it took my own son.
[Pan around the entire team. None of them are having an easy time
with this at all, though Dex looks the most impassive. Goran stares
down at the table, then takes a drink.]
DEX: That's it? One Wraith in the forest? [reaches for his gun on
the
table and flicks the arming mechanism]
GORAN: Yes.
DEX: [rising to his feet] I'm done by morning!
SHEPPARD: Whoa, whoa, whoa! [Lightning crashes outside.] We'll
all go
together... in the daylight!
[Dex looks as if he has something he'd *really* like to say about
that, but restrains himself. Callup pauses as he walks past with a
pitcher.]
CALLUP: You're really going to help us?
SHEPPARD: Well, like the man said [gestures at Dex, who is still
standing] it's just one Wraith. It'd be downright unneigborly
if we
didn't. [Picks up his own glass of red beverage and drinks as,
next
to him, McKay stares uneasily at the table.]
CALLUP: In that case? Drinks are on me.
[Dex slowly sits back down as Callup darts off and McKay looks after
him.]
McKAY: Well, uh... let's not forget the food!
[Dissolve to an exterior shot the next day. Rodney is sitting on a
rock in the village square, which looks more like a forest clearing
in the daylight. He looks worried and generally unhappy with the
present turn of events. There is a young boy half-hidden behind him,
staring. McKay spots him while looking around, then seems to relax
into his normal state of aggravation.]
McKAY: What?!?
[The boy approaches eagerly.]
BOY: Is it true? You're going to hunt the Daimos?
[He's at that age where we aren't really sure who he's
rooting for,
but just hopes to see some blood and guts on the ground before
it's
all over. McKay looks scathing.]
McKAY: It looks that way.
BOY: [open-mouthed with wonder] I heard it has two heads, and can
turn you to stone just by looking at you!
McKAY: [getting to his feet impatiently] Well, you heard wrong.
BOY: My uncle says it'll come and take me if I don't do my
chores.
McKAY: He said that, huh? Well then, if we get rid of it, you've
got
nothing to worry about. You'll never have to do chores again.
BOY: *Really?!*
McKAY: Yes, [tchah sound] ... go away!
[Looking disappointed, the boy does so. There's a pan that makes
it
first look as if McKay is staring after him, then the other three
team members come into the shot, all staring at McKay.]
McKAY: What?!?
GORAN: [approaching from behind the rest of the team, who turn to
look at him] As far as we know, no one was taken last night, but it
will strike... and soon.
DEX: [making impressive noises with his firearm again] We'll kill
it
before that happens.
SHEPPARD: [as they head out] You must be *great* at parties.
[Dissolve to team spread out and stalking through the woods, Dex on
point, then Sheppard and McKay, with Teyla bringing up the rear.
Dissolve to an impatient-looking Teyla crossing in front of McKay and
Sheppard, who both look a lot less alert than in the other shot.]
McKAY: We're talking about a hundred square miles of forest, here.
SHEPPARD: [in a lower voice] Be patient. Ronon's been going up
against the Wraith, one-on-one, for the last seven years. If anyone
can track this thing, it's him.
McKAY: And exactly how is he going to do that, huh?
DEX: [from a distance, where he was examining a log] It helps to have
good hearing.
McKAY: [looking a little shocked] Right!
[Sheppard smacks the back of McKay's head and walks toward Dex,
Teyla
and their log.]
McKAY: Carry on! [turns to follow Sheppard.]
[Dissolve to another forest scene. Team moving with a lot less
enthusiasm. Cut to Teyla, who sighs and looks up at the forest
canopy.]
SHEPPARD: How about you? Are you sensing anything?
TEYLA: I am not sure.
SHEPPARD: What do you mean?
TEYLA: There is a presence here, but it is... different.
[The way she's moving her head makes it hard to tell if she's
tired,
confused or trying to look like she did in "The Gift" a few
seconds
before the Wraith possessed her.]
TEYLA: I cannot quite explain it.
[McKay and Sheppard were watching Teyla as she spoke, while Dex
wandered around in the background, still looking for signs of their
quarry. We see him stop, which catches everyone else's eye, but
he
raises his hand to forestall anyone talking. Sheppard moves to join
him as Dex pulls a firearm from under his long, tan duster.]
DEX: It's in there.
[Quick cut to a thicket ahead of them, where we see a flash of white
race by as leaves rustle. Dex takes off after it like a *shot*.]
SHEPPARD: Ronon! Dammit.
[Sheppard runs after him when Dex doesn't stop. Pan to Teyla and
McKay, who stare for a beat, then take off after Sheppard, looking
worried.]
[Much running through the woods to dramatic music ensues. Dex is way
out in front (they didn't call his episode "Runner" for
nothing,
apparently) with the others keeping up as best they can. There is log
leaping and branch snapping and panting and downward angles on
running boots and all kinds of activity suggestive of a merry chase.
The cinematographers clearly earned their keep this day.]
[Dex at last comes to a halt, gun aimed steadily into the mouth of a
cave. He glances over his shoulder, looking a little surprised no one
kept up with him. He crouches, gun pointed down, while he waits for
the others to get there. They all charge up, panting, and Dex gets
back to his feet.]
DEX: It's in there.
SHEPPARD: It was the Wraith?
DEX: Yeah.
McKAY: Did you see it?!?
DEX: No.
McKAY: So, how do you know?!
[Dex turns his head toward McKay, clearly ready with a withering take-
down of his own, when Teyla interrupts.]
TEYLA: Ronon is correct. I can definitely sense it now.
[Sheppard, Teyla and Dex all attach their flashlights to their
weapons and the team enters the cave, guns first, McKay taking up the
rear. They make their way through dark stone corridors, panning their
lights around, until they come to an intersection and pause at the
sight of a white flash around a corner, then make out a face staring
at them, which quickly disappears.]
TEYLA: A female!
[They all take off after the Wraith.]
[We see a smallish form, at least in comparison to other Wraith,
running down the corridor, bursting through a door into a lab that
would do any medieval dungeon proud and into the arms of an older man
in panic.]
OLD MAN: Ellia?
[Ellia cowers as the team bursts in, guns aimed at them both.]
SHEPPARD: Get out of the way!
[It's his `no kidding around, someone's about to be very
dead' voice.
The rest of the team are all wearing their `he is *so* not joking
about this' faces as they take aim.]
OLD MAN: Please! Don't shoot! She's not what you think!
[As he speaks, the camera follows Dex coming up behind the bottles
and vials on the work table, looking for the best shot. Pan back to
the old man, whose name is Zaddik, holding the girl-Wraith
protectively.]
ZADDIK: She's my daughter.
[Pan to team expressions from horrified (Rodney) to disbelieving (Dex
and Teyla) to `oh crap what now?' (Sheppard)]
[Dissolve back to same tableau from a wider angle, showing all guns
aimed unwaveringly at father and daughter.]
ZADDIK: She means you no harm!
DEX: She's a Wraith!
ZADDIK: Maybe so, but she's different! I swear to you!
[Cut from man and daughter to the team, all of whom still look
skeptical, to put it mildly.]
SHEPPARD: Let me guess? Wraith with a heart of gold?
ZADDIK: She doesn't feed. She's never taken a human life.
TEYLA: [seen over the barrel of her gun] How is that possible?
ZADDIK: Please! Lower your weapons, and I'll explain it to you.
[There is a *very* long pause. Sheppard lowers his weapon first,
followed by McKay (who had pulled out and aimed a pistol) then Teyla.
We can't see if Dex has followed suit.]
ZADDIK: [to Ellia] It's all right.
ELLIA: [shakily] Father!
ZADDIK: I won't let them hurt you. [Pulls her back into a
comforting
hug as he turns to address the team.] I raised her as my own.
[Quick cut to Teyla, arching a skeptical eyebrow and standing with
her gun down, but clearly ready to pull it back into position.]
TEYLA: You live here? Together?
[She seems to find that prospect someone sickening]
ZADDIK: This was part of a mine, before the last culling. It's
not
much to look at, I know, but we don't have much choice. The
people of
the village would not understand.
[Ellia hides her face at that.]
SHEPPARD: Gee. I wonder why?
[Camera follows McKay as he walks over to the workbench to stare at
the apparatus there.]
TEYLA: The villagers told us that there was a Wraith in the forest.
It came here in a crashed ship ten years ago.
ZADDIK: Ten years ago? [McKay looks toward father and daughter with
that doom and gloom look he does so well.] Ellia was just a child! Do
you really think she could be responsible for the deaths that
happened immediately after that crash?
McKAY: So you know about that, then?
ZADDIK: I was there. [Dramatic music swells, and he puts Ellia away
from him. She looks distressed as all get out.] I helped kill the
survivors.
[More hissy flashback music as we dissolve to an exterior forest
scene in misty daylight. Pan across the forest floor to an
unconscious girl collapsed in a dark cloak.]
ZADDIK: But, when I found a young female lying unconscious some
distance from the crash? I couldn't bring myself to hurt her. [In
the
flashback, he turns over the girl, then the scene dissolves back to
the present day cave.] I brought her here to this cave to hide her
from the others. To this day, the people of the village don't
know...
and, and you must promise not to tell them!
[Cut to Sheppard and McKay, who look *really* unwilling to make any
such promise.]
ZADDIK: She's *not* responsible for what's been happening!
[Cut to Dex, who appears to be pondering recipes for Wraith stew,
Wraith kebob, Wraith flambé... you get the picture. He looks ready
to
kill him a Wraith girl.]
DEX: Well then, who is?
ZADDIK: I believe another Wraith survived the crash.
[Cut to Sheppard, looking skeptical again.]
ZADDIK: An adult. That's who you should be looking for!
TEYLA: [who might have some Wraith recipes to share with Dex] If she
does not feed, how does she live?
[Cut to classic "ewwww" reaction shots from Sheppard and
McKay.]
ZADDIK: First, I fed her as you would any child, and that seemed to
suffice. But then, something began to change.
[Cut to McKay, who's staring at the lab apparatus again, looking
less
horrified and more scientifically curious.]
ZADDIK: The food no longer gave her any sustenance. There was a
hunger growing in her that would not be satisfied. I... heard the
stories of the other creature, what it did to survive. And I was
afraid that was what Ellia would become. And so I started to
experiment.
[McKay's futzing around with the equipment has attracted
Dex's
attention.]
ZADDIK: I have extensive knowledge of the various properties of the
medicinal plants that grow in this forest.
[Cut to close up of McKay picking up a rack of test tubes with twigs
and leaves in them.]
ZADDIK: Are you... interested in science?
[There is a *very* predictable expression from McKay at that
question.]
McKAY: I'm not sure that's what I'd call this, but *yes*.
ZADDIK: Ellia's hunger was growing stronger every day and I
wasn't
sure I could do anything for her. But, eventually [steps slightly
away from Ellia to pick a bottle of dark red fluid off the work
bench] I came up with this.
[McKay looks caught between realism and wanting to believe there is
something that can deter Wraith feeding; Sheppard looks reluctant to
believe what is too good to be true.]
[Quick cut back to exterior of Atlantis, then to the infirmary as
seen over Beckett's shoulder, where Sheppard is seated very
casually
across an exam bed as Weir questions him.]
WEIR: A drug that allows the Wraith to survive without feeding?
SHEPPARD: That's what he said.
WEIR: Is such a thing even possible?
[Cut to Beckett, looking neutral.]
BECKETT: We don't know enough about Wraith physiology to say for
certain, although I must admit it's intriguing that this Doctor
Zaddik said the Wraith survived on normal food for a time.
SHEPPARD: Why?
BECKETT: Well, if he's telling the truth, it might be the answer
to a
very puzzling question. Right now, our best guess is that the Wraith
evolved from the iratus bug.
SHEPPARD: Like the one that attached itself to my *neck* a year ago?
BECKETT: That's right.
SHEPPARD: I *hate* those bugs.
BECKETT: Trust me, I know. We speculated that they evolved into the
Wraith when they began to take on the characteristic of the humans
they were feeding on.
[Sheppard looks as if this is *way* too much information.]
BECKETT: Now, there are many aspects of human physiology that are
quite useful: bipedal motion, opposable thumbs, large brain
capacity... but the human digestive system serves no purpose in the
adult Wraith. So why have one at all?
WEIR: Because they eat normal food when they're young?
BECKETT: Exactly! Then at some point, they lose the ability to
sustain themselves with that food.
SHEPPARD: So it's a teenage thing? Pimples, rebellion,
life-sucking?
[Weir is wearing her `must you *always* joke?' face, then
smiles
slightly at Sheppard before turning back to Beckett.]
BECKETT: Something like that! The question is, what causes it? If
it's due to some chemical deficiency, like a diabetic's
inability to
process sugar, then it's possible to maybe address with some kind
of
drug.
[Beckett is looking hopeful at this point.]
WEIR: Zaddik could be telling the truth.
BECKETT: I'd like to go to the planet and check into it.
WEIR: Is that really necessary? I'm sure we could get a sample,
bring
it back here for you to analyze?
BECKETT: It's not just the drug I'm interested in! This young
Wraith
could be very important for our research.
[This gets Sheppard's attention.]
SHEPPARD: What research?
BECKETT: We're working on a retro-virus that would alter Wraith
DNA,
essentially stripping out the bug elements of the genetic code and
leaving only the human aspects behind.
SHEPPARD: A drug that turns Wraith into humans?
BECKETT: Effectively, yes! But so far we haven't had much
success,
partly because we lacked the living tissue and blood samples we need
to test it.
WEIR: You think this... girl would be willing to provide them?
BECKETT: Look, I realize we can't bring her back to Atlantis, but
I
could take the retro-virus and equipment necessary for the analysis
with me to the planet. A few days with a cooperative test subject
could be worth months of theoretical research. [Weir is looking
reluctantly interested.] Elizabeth, I don't have to tell you how
important this could be for us.
[Weir turns back to Sheppard.]
WEIR: Is she dangerous?
SHEPPARD: She's a Wraith!
[Weir looks sharply at Beckett, who looks disappointed.]
SHEPPARD: Although... I have to admit... she does seem a little
different.
[Quick cut to an extreme close-up of girl-Wraith hands working a
mortar and pestle. Pull back to Ellia concentrating hard on her task
as Zaddik looks on.]
ZADDIK: Now, remember... the leaves must be dried, and finely ground.
ELLIA: Like... this?
[Firefly fans with very sharp ears will recognize Engineer
Kaylee's
lilting voice, but only the most rabid will be able to make out Jewel
Staite's features under the Wraith makeup and prosthetics. Also,
the
body language is completely different. She differentiated the
characters completely.]
ZADDIK: A little more.
[He walks around to the other side of the work bench as Ellia
continues her efforts.]
ZADDIK: Now, why is distillation an important step?
ELLIA: [hesitantly] To... remove the toxins from the ferassin root?
ZADDIK: [with a proud daddy smile] Precisely!
[Ellia returns it with a creepy Wraith smile only a father could
love, and he clearly does. It's a tender father teaching his
little
girl moment.]
ZADDIK: We wouldn't want the serum to send you into paralytic
shock,
now would we?
ELLIA: Nooo, Father.
[Cut to McKay and Teyla, looking on from the other side of the room.
McKay, looking creeped out, lets out a huff of breath.]
McKAY: [quietly to Teyla] Seriously. Have you ever seen anything like
this before?
TEYLA: [looking away, then back] No, I have not. She's unlike any
Wraith I've ever encountered.
McKAY: What if it's all an act?
TEYLA: If she were a killer, why would he protect her?
McKAY: Maybe the act's for his benefit, too?
TEYLA: [shaking her head] They live here together, Rodney. If she
were like other Wraith, he would be her first victim.
[Chirp of static from the radio]
SHEPPARD: [over radio] Teyla, this is Sheppard.
TEYLA: [turning slightly so she can speak quietly into her radio] Go
ahead.
[Cut to exterior shot of Sheppard, Beckett and Dex filing through the
woods. All are carrying largish black cases.]
SHEPPARD: Just got back with Beckett. Ronon's gonna take him up
to
the cave, I'm gonna check back in with the villagers.
TEYLA: [softly, over the radio] What are you going to tell them?
SHEPPARD: I'm still workin' on that.
[Sheppard stops and hands his black case to Dex, who already had one
in each hand, so he props it on the larger, and heads off. Dex sets
down the big case, hands the smaller one abruptly to Beckett, who had
a hand free, and picks up the others. It looks a lot funnier than it
reads, given Dex's matter of fact body language and Beckett's
mild
outrage at having to carry an additional case. Think Keystone Kops
with big black boxes.]
[Cut to interior shot of the cave, close-up on one of the black cases
being opened. It was Bring Your Laboratory to Work Day in Atlantis,
and Beckett responded with enthusiasm. He sets out equipment,
beginning with the all-important laptop computer. Ellia, McKay,
Zaddik and Teyla are all at least partially visible in this shot.]
ZADDIK: This equipment... is remarkable! Where did you get it?
[Beckett has that `what *does* one say?' look on.]
BECKETT: Oh, here and there. Let's start by analyzin' that
drug of
yours, shall we?
ZADDIK: Oh, yes. Of course.
[Ellia approaches with a tray. In this scene, she is most
recognizable as Jewel "Kaylee" Staite, mainly because of the
amount
of dialog (that lovely voice!) and how sweet she's being.]
ELLIA: Would you like some tea?
[Beckett and McKay stare.]
ZADDIK: [softly, taking some tea] Oh, thank you.
[Ellia actually lifts a cup from her tray and offers it to McKay, who
waves it away.]
McKAY: No, no.
[She will not be denied, and McKay finds himself with a clay cup of
tea in his hand, giving it the same careful regard he would a hissing
cockroach. Ellia tries the same handing-the-cup thing with Beckett,
but he turns her down more graciously, and successfully.]
BECKETT: Oh, no thank you.
[McKay is wearing his `how'd you do that?' face as Ellia
crosses the
cave lab area to Dex, who has apparently been keeping his distance on
purpose. He's leaning against a cave wall, not looking at Ellia
as
she approaches.]
ELLIA: Would you like some...
DEX: No.
ELLIA: Are, are you sure? It's very good!
[Dex comes away from the wall with the sort of body language possible
only by the very fit and well-coordinated.]
DEX: I said no.
[Frankly, he looms, arms crossed while glaring at her. Ellia turns
and leaves quickly. It is to be hoped Teyla wanted no tea. We see
Ellia go down to another room and set her tea tray on a table, then
pick up a plate of something pale and pitter-pat back into the lab
area, approaching Dex first.]
ELLIA: Then maybe some biscuits? I baked them myself.
[Quick as a snake, Dex strikes the plate out of her hands, scaring
her (and me) to death.]
DEX: STAY AWAY FROM ME!
[Ellia lets out an ear-splitting Wraith shriek, scaring everyone in
the room but Dex to death. It's extremely shrill and creepy. Dex
has
his sidearm out and pressed to her chest in one very smooth motion.]
TEYLA: Ronon!
[Ellia stops shrieking. We see a close-up of Dex wearing his
`dead
Wraith walking' face over the steadily-aimed barrel of his
sidearm,
then cut to Ellia backing away to stand next to Teyla, who is holding
out a restraining hand with her `we can't take you
*any*where' face.
Ellia, looking ashamed of her own actions and humiliated by
Dex's,
leaves the room without a word. We hear a door close behind her.]
[Short tableau of the folks from Atlantis. Beckett is staring after
Ellia in scientific frustration, McKay is staring after her the way
he would a departing vanquished citrus, while Teyla glares at Dex,
who looks unrepentant as all hell.]
[Quick cut to Zaddik making his way down dark stone corridors,
clearly looking for Ellia. Though the ceiling is plenty high enough,
he's moving stiffly and a little stooped over. It's the most
elderly
we've seen him act. He turns a corner and finds her huddled
against a
wall, head down in sorrow. He sits down beside her and puts a
comforting arm around her shoulder.]
ZADDIK: It's all right, it's OK.
ELLIA: They hate me, don't they, Father?
ZADDIK: No! No, no, no! They just don't know you.
[He comforts her and there's a quick cut back to Teyla about to
rip
Dex a new one, in her own Athosian way.]
TEYLA: [low voice, very intent] Was that really necessary?
DEX: You can dress her up and teach her table manners, but that's
not
going to change who she is.
[Dex looms over Teyla as he edges very closely past her. He then
stalks between Beckett and McKay, sort of forcing McKay to one side,
and leaves the room.]
[Radio chirps static]
SHEPPARD: [over the radio] Teyla, this is Sheppard. Come in?
[Her body language suggests she was going to go after Dex, but she
stops, resigned.]
TEYLA: Go ahead, Colonel.
[The next bit is partly over the radio, partly cutting between Teyla
in the cave and Sheppard in the village square.]
SHEPPARD: Is Ellia still in the cave?
TEYLA: Yes.
SHEPPARD: She been there the whole time?
TEYLA: Yes, why?
SHEPPARD: I just found another victim.
[Quick cut to Beckett and McKay exchanging horrified glances.]
SHEPPARD: Apparently he's only been missing a couple of hours,
which
means she couldn't have done it.
[Cut to exterior village shot, Sheppard is watching over his shoulder
as villagers haul a body away in a cart.]
SHEPPARD: So, Zaddik might have been telling the truth after all.
[Dissolve to exterior daylight shot of the village square, with
villagers milling around and talking restlessly about self-defense.
Goran breaks away from a conversation and walks to Sheppard.]
GORAN: Colonel Sheppard, is there any progress with this hunt?
SHEPPARD: We're workin' on it.
GORAN: Maybe we can help you.
SHEPPARD: That won't be necessary.
CALLUP: We're sick of doing nothing! We're sick of being
afraid all
the time. That thing is hunting in daylight now! We'll never be
safe.
SHEPPARD: Just be patient. We'll take care of it!
[He turns and walks away.]
[Dissolve to interior cave shot, camera following Dex as he walks
past Zaddik and Sheppard, where the camera pauses. Dex moves, stalks
out of the shot.]
ZADDIK: See? I told you she wasn't responsible for the killings.
The
serum makes it unnecessary for her to feed.
SHEPPARD: [to Beckett] Can you confirm that?
BECKETT: Not yet. It will be a while before I can complete my
analysis.
SHEPPARD: [softly] All right. [aloud, to Zaddik] Well in the
meantime, there's another Wraith out there.
[Turns to look at Teyla and Dex, who are standing nearly in the
shadows by a tunnel out of Zaddik's laboratory. Teyla approaches
them.]
TEYLA: I believe Ellia may be able to help us find it.
ZADDIK: How?
TEYLA: May I speak with her?
ZADDIK: All right.
[Quick cut to Ellia's room, where she is seated on her cot,
staring
down at her hands in her lap, a picture of adolescent dejection.
Teyla peeks around the draped brown cloth that separates the space
from the rest of the caves.]
TEYLA: May I join you?
[Ellia looks over her shoulder and shrugs wordlessly. Teyla takes
that as a yes and comes in.]
TEYLA: Ellia, we need your help.
[Long, wordless stare between the two.]
TEYLA: You can sense the other Wraith.
[It was more a statement than a question, and Ellia looks away from
Teyla, still not speaking.]
TEYLA: It is all right. [moves to sit beside Ellia on the cot]
There's nothing to be ashamed of... in fact, I have the same
ability.
ELLIA: [looks up hopefully] Really?
TEYLA: I sensed you in the forest, when you were watching us, and I
knew even then that you were... different.
[Cut to Ellia lowering her eyes at that.]
TEYLA: Your father has raised you well, taught you right from wrong.
[Faint smile from Ellia, nearly a human one.]
TEYLA: You are *not* like the other one.
ELLIA: [looking near tears, slightly shaking her head] I don't
let
him in. [looks away] I don't like what he shows me.
TEYLA: I know. [inhales deeply] But you have to try now. We need to
find him.
ELLIA: [looking back, shaking her head] You don't understand.
TEYLA: I have tried myself, but I can get nothing. [long pause, faint
lip-twitch of a smile from Teyla.] Please.
ELLIA: All right.
TEYLA: Good. [takes another deep breath] Now concentrate.
[Mystic music plays as Ellia stares into the middle distance, then
slowly lets her eyes close. Music morphs into the terrifying shriek
of a Wraith, and there are a few abrupt cuts to what must be the
adult Wraith's point of view as it travels through the forest.
Cut
back to Ellia show her in clear emotional distress and nearly
hyperventilating.]
TEYLA: Try again.
[Ellia has her `*you* try again' face on for a second, but
takes a
settling breath and closes her eyes again. Music again morphs into a
Wraith shriek, and we again cut back and forth between Ellia's
face
and the woodland scene in front of the other Wraith. Eventually, the
other-Wraith point of view settles on a distinctive-looking river in
a rocky bed.]
[Ellia snaps out of it, breathing a little more evenly than last
time, and looks a little sweaty but triumphant.]
ELLIA: I saw a river.
[Quick cut to Zaddik's lab. Zaddik is in the foreground, across a
workbench from a stone-faced Dex, standing next to Sheppard and
watching Beckett peer through a microscope at the end of the
workbench. Over Beckett's shoulder, McKay can be seen examining
the
contents of some shelves along the back wall. All but Beckett are
standing. We hear Teyla from off-screen, but the camera quickly pans
to her entering the room at a brisk walk.]
TEYLA: Zaddik? Is there a river nearby?
ZADDIK: Yes, just to the east.
[The guys have all turned to look at Teyla, who reaches past Zaddik
to recover her weapon and ready it. Sheppard and Dex follow suit.]
SHEPPARD: All right, let's go. McKay, stay here and help Beckett.
McKAY: Ah, medical research? Not really my thing.
SHEPPARD: And hunting Wraith?
[McKay looks extremely chagrined.]
McKAY: Uh, I could stay... and... help... Beckett.
[`We thought as much' looks from Sheppard and Teyla, who then
follow
the long-gone Dex out the door. McKay heaves a sigh and heads back to
the workbench.]
McKAY: Never could get into biology. It's just too much
information
about the human body. One time I took it as an undergrad, I diagnosed
myself with half a dozen separate medical conditions before I had to
drop the class.
BECKETT: [still looking through the microscope] Really?
McKAY: Yeah. Believe it or not, back then, I was a bit of a
hypochondriac.
BECKETT: Y'know, this does require a certain amount of
concentration.
McKAY: [getting snarky] What? Am I *bothering* you?
[Beckett finally looks up from the microscope, patience clearly
taxed. McKay heads for the door.]
McKAY: I'm gonna get some air.
[Zaddik exchanges a sympathetic glance with Beckett as McKay leaves.]
[Dissolve to exterior shot by the river Ellia saw in her vision. We
see Sheppard and Teyla make their way over the rocky riverbed.]
TEYLA: This must be the river she saw in her vision.
SHEPPARD: Assuming she's telling the truth.
[Teyla give him a look. Sheppard becomes a voiceover as the camera
finds Dex examining tracks in the dirt.]
SHEPPARD: Just because there's another Wraith doesn't mean
you can
trust her.
[Dex gently pokes the edges of the imprint in the dirt and looks up
and around.]
SHEPPARD: What've you got?
DEX: Fresh tracks. It's him.
TEYLA: [to Sheppard] Now do you believe?
SHEPPARD: I still think there's more to this than she and Zaddik
are
telling us.
DEX: [rising to his feet and gesturing] He's headin'
upstream, into
the hills.
[All move briskly in that direction.]
[Dissolve back to Zaddik's lab. Beckett looks very busy with his
equipment.]
ZADDIK: Let me... ask you something?
[Beckett looks a little reluctant, but nods.]
ZADDIK: If you can prove to everyone that I'm telling the truth,
that
Ellia no longer needs to feed, do you think the villagers would
accept her?
[Beckett's expression says it all.]
ZADDIK: That's what I'm afraid of.
[The camera shot widens and pulls back until we see Ellia hiding
around the corner from Zaddik and Beckett, listening to everything
they say. She isn't liking what she's hearing.]
ZADDIK: No matter how hard we try to convince them, they will always
see her as a monster.
[We see Ellia look down in dejection. Camera zooms back into the lab
for close shots of Beckett and Zaddik.]
ZADDIK: I'm getting old, Doctor.
BECKETT: Well, you've got lots of time.
ZADDIK: [scoffs politely] Never have as much as we think we have!
[They share a rueful laugh.]
ZADDIK: And when I'm gone, she'll be alone. I, uh... tried to
teach
her about love and human companionship, but that's exactly what
she'll never have.
[Cut back to the view that includes Ellia, who is looking very bleak,
then back in tight on the two men.]
BECKETT: Zaddik, there's something I want to show you. [Walks
around
the workbench to one of the black cases.] I didn't say anything
at
first, because I didn't want to get your hopes up. [Opens the
case
and pulls out a syringe.] It's a retrovirus. Something I've
been
working on.
ZADDIK: I, I don't understand?
BECKETT: [softly to himself] Ah, God! How'm I goin' to
explain this?
[aloud] Part of Ellia is human.
[Zaddik nods in understanding.]
BECKETT: And part comes from a creature we call the iratus bug.
[Zaddik looks less understanding.]
BECKETT: It's the part that makes her look the way she does, and
where her desire to feed comes from.
[Quick shot including Ellia, who looks faintly hopeful.]
BECKETT: Now, it's possible by means of this retrovirus, we can
strip
away those parts, and leave only the human behind.
[Ellia looks thrilled.]
ZADDIK: You mean... she'd be like you and me?
BECKETT: Yes! Now, I must warn you the retrovirus is still
experimental. In fact, it's only been tested on cell cultures in
a
laboratory, so far without much success. [He puts the syringe back
in the case and snaps it closed.] I'm hoping that what we can
learn
from your daughter will help me perfect it.
[Zaddik is grinning broadly and in delight. Beckett gives him a
comradely pat on the arm, then both of them startle as McKay charges
into the room at a full run, breathing heavily.]
McKAY: [pointing back the way he came] We, we got a problem!
BECKETT: [following him out at a run] Why didn't you just radio
me?!?
McKAY: [indistinct] Yeah, I could have, but... [fades]
[Zaddik runs out after them and dramatic music comes up as the camera
pans over to Ellia coming out of hiding. Checking around to make sure
everyone's gone, she tiptoes over to the case and carefully opens
it
to reveal four or five syringes in foam padding. Camera zooms in on
her hand reaching for one, then up to her frightened but very
determined expression.]
[Dissolve to an exterior forest scene outside the cave. McKay,
Beckett and Zaddik are running bent over to seek cover toward the
growing sound of approaching villagers. They drop down to watch from
over a rise in the forest floor. Villagers go by carrying their farm
implements and speaking loudly.]
McKAY: Looks like they decided to join the hunt.
ZADDIK: If they find Ellia, they'll kill her!
[Quick cut to another part of the forest as a radio chirps static.]
McKAY: [voiceover] Sheppard, this is McKay.
SHEPPARD: What is it, Rodney?
[Cut back to McKay, watching villagers.]
McKAY: The villagers are on the move, and it doesn't look like
they're goin' to a picnic.
[Cut back to Sheppard, hiking through a denser part of the forest
with Teyla and Dex.]
SHEPPARD: They headin' for the caves?
[Cut back to McKay, watching villagers head off down a trail.]
McKAY: Not at the moment, no.
[Cut back to Sheppard, watching Dex look more alert.]
SHEPPARD: All right, get back there and sit tight. [Closes radio
connection and looks over at Teyla and Dex.] We're losin'
time,
guys.
[Dissolve back to Zaddik's lab. We can see the open case in the
foreground.]
ZADDIK: Ellia?
[He begins to search the other caves for her.]
ZADDIK: Ellia?!? [comes back to lab] She's not here!
[McKay stops just inside the lab and stands with his arms crossed
defensively. Carson comes around the workbench and discovers the open
case, then the spent syringe.]
BECKETT: Good lord! [picks up syringe] She took the retrovirus!
ZADDIK: You said it wasn't ready?
BECKETT: It's not! Not by a long shot!
[All exchange very worried glances.]
ZADDIK: What'll it do to her?
BECKETT: To be honest? I have no idea!
[Dissolve back to exterior forest, with Dex making his way alertly
through the trees with Sheppard, then Teyla, at intervals behind him.]
[Radio chirps static]
BECKETT: [over radio] Colonel Sheppard, come in!
SHEPPARD: Go ahead.
BECKETT: [over radio] We've got another problem.
[Cut to Beckett in the caves.]
BECKETT: Ellia's gone, and she's injected herself with the
retrovirus.
[Cut back to Sheppard in the forest, still staring around sharply.]
SHEPPARD: Why would she do *that*?
BECKETT: [over radio] She must've heard us talking about it.
[Cut to Beckett in the lab.]
BECKETT: I told Zaddik it might be the key to makin' her human.
ZADDIK: Please! You've got to find her before the villagers do.
[McKay looks up from the end of the table. He and Beckett both look
horrified at the thought of what will happen to her.]
SHEPPARD: [over radio] Look! Ronon says we're close... [cut to
Sheppard outside] If we lose the trail now, we may never catch the
Wraith!
BECKETT: [over radio] Rodney and I will find her!
[Cut back to the cave. McKay looks disbelieving.]
SHEPPARD: [over radio] All right, but be careful!
BECKETT: Understood.
ZADDIK: I'll come with you!
BECKETT: No, I think it's best if you stay here.
McKAY: Look, is there anywhere she liked to go? Any favorite, uh...
hiding spots? Or favorite places?
ZADDIK: Yes! She often goes off for hours at a time, up into the
hills. I don't like it, but she doesn't listen to me.
BECKETT: It's a start!
[He and McKay run out of the cave.]
[Dissolve back outdoors, Beckett and McKay hiking through the woods,
puffing over a hill.]
McKAY: Y'know, I thought it was pretty nuts when Ronon was trying
to
track her right through this part.
BECKETT: Now that it's just us, do you feel any better?
McKAY: Oh, yeah. Supremely confident.
[We see that McKay has his pistol out and is hiking while holding it
in both hands.]
[Dissolve back to Zaddik looking worried in his lab.]
ELLIA: [from offscreen] Father?
[Camera pans over to her in the doorway. She doesn't look any
different. Zaddik rushes over to gather her into a hug.]
ZADDIK: Where did you go?
ELLIA: I was hiding. I didn't want the others to know.
ZADDIK: To know? What?
[They come farther into the room together, Zaddik still holding her
arm supportively.]
ZADDIK: Ellia, why did you take the retrovirus?
ELLIA: Because I don't want to be this way any more! I hate what
I am!
[Zaddik follows her toward the workbench.]
ZADDIK: You heard what Doctor Beckett said. You know the retrovirus
isn't ready!
[Ellia turns to face him, looking very somber.]
ELLIA: I had no choice.
[Zaddik looks lost.]
ELLIA: When they kill the other Wraith, I won't be able to
pretend
any more.
[She hangs her head in shame.]
ZADDIK: Pretend? What?
ELLIA: [looking up] I wanted to tell you for a long time. [Long look]
Your serum doesn't work, Father. It never has.
ZADDIK: That's impossible. It's been two years since...
[Ellia looks away abruptly, then back as he hesitates.]
ZADDIK: … since the last time. That wasn't your fault, it was
my
idea! I needed time to perfect the formula.
[Ellia's been shaking her head through most of this.]
ELLIA: But it wasn't working! The hunger just... got worse.
[looks
down]
[Zaddik straightens up in growing horror.]
ZADDIK: What did you do?
ELLIA: I'm sorry, Father.
ZADDIK: No! No, that was the other one.
ELLIA: It was both of us. I sensed him out there. I knew when he was
feeding and I would go out at the same time.
[Zaddik is shaking his head vehemently.]
ZADDIK: No, no! No, it can't be.
[Ellia gasps and doubles up in pain. Zaddik catches her before she
can fall to the ground.]
ZADDIK: Ellia?!?
[She pushes him away and braces herself against the workbench.]
ELLIA: Stay away!
ZADDIK: What is it? What's happening?
[Ellia is gasping in pain and we hear a crackling, tearing sound as
the camera zooms in on her hand changing against the edge of the
workbench. It's going from fish-belly Wraith white to a necrotic
bluish black as we watch. Her fingernails grow longer, pointed and
black.]
ELLIA: [Emits a Wraith shriek as the bluish black creeps up her arm
to her neck and face.]
ZADDIK: [approaching her again] Let me help you...
[Ellia pushes him violently away, shrieking again, then runs for the
cave entrance, moving as if in pain from the transformation. Zaddik
stares after her in panic.]
[Exterior shot in the forest. Dex is examining detritus inside a
makeshift shelter.]
DEX: Sheppard?
[Sheppard and Teyla hurry over from where they've been keeping
watch.]
DEX: This is where he's been making camp. [stands up] He was here
less than an hour ago.
[All stare around, looking for signs of where the Wraith went.]
[Dissolve to Beckett and McKay making their way through the hilly
part of the forest. McKay still has his pistol out. He pauses,
staring around intently. From a slight distance, Beckett looks back
to see what's become of him.]
McKAY: You hear anything?
BECKETT: No.
McKAY: Huh.
[We see an adult Wraith in full costume drop out of a tree behind
Beckett, who gets swatted aside and goes flying about a dozen feet
into the underbrush. McKay has run up and is firing more or less at
point blank range with the pistol, but the Wraith knocks that out of
his hand and swats McKay to the ground at his feet.]
[Quick cut to Teyla, Sheppard and Dex, who've heard the single
shot
McKay squeezed off. They head in that direction at a dead run.]
[Cut back to the Wraith looming over McKay in a creepily anticipatory
manner. Lunch!]
[McKay is scrambling backward desperately, and the Wraith is cat and
mousing him a little. Too bad for the Wraith, as a shrieking white
figure appears out of nowhere and knocks the adult Wraith to the
ground. It's Ellia, still out of her head, but apparently helping
our
team. Beckett and McKay look on in shock as Ellia proceeds to beat
the *tar* out of the adult Wraith, eventually snapping his neck and
killing him, because, as Firefly fans everywhere will tell you, NO
POWER IN THE `VERSE CAN STOP HER!]
[McKay is back on his feet, and we can see Beckett getting up over
Ellia's shoulder as she approaches McKay, snarling and growling.]
McKAY: Easy, now! You went to all that trouble to save my life, be a
shame to kill me!
[A shot rings out, hitting Ellia in the shoulder.]
[She snaps around, and we get a clear look at her face, which is
gaunt. Half of it is the color of a bruise. We see Beckett in a
crouch with his pistol out, surprised either that he hit what he was
aiming for or that it did not drop her where she stood. Ellia shrieks
defiantly, then runs into the brush, McKay staring after her in
shock.]
BECKETT: [running up] You all right, Rodney?
[McKay is nearly hyperventilating. He puts his hand over his heart
where Wraith feed, and looks as if he's having a hard time not
fainting ... er, passing out.]
McKAY: [nearly incoherent at the near miss] He, she... reaching
out... what the hell was that?
BECKETT: [chagrined] The retrovirus is having the opposite effect
from what we intended.
McKAY: I guess *so*!
BECKETT: [to himself] Ah, God!
McKAY: [some inaudible, adlib dialog that indicates his continued
distress at nearly being lunch for a couple of Wraith.]
[Beckett pats him on the arm.]
BECKETT: You're all right.
[McKay lifts the hem of his uniform shirt and jacket and... well,
basically feels himself up in panic. Beckett makes an exasperated
noise and turns away to leave him to calming down on his own.]
[Dissolve to a shot of Zaddik making his way slowly through the
forest, checking around for Ellia. She appears between two trees at a
slight distance, looking worse for wear.]
ZADDIK: [low, pleading] Ellia?
[She approaches, growling.]
ZADDIK: You poor girl! You never deserved this.
[He's clearly unnerved by her appearance, but hesitantly stands
his
ground as she grows closer, still growling.]
ZADDIK: I know part of you is still there.
[She's right in front of him now, and he looks hopeful, until she
strikes and wraps a completely transformed, claw-like hand around his
neck, lifting him off his feet.]
ZADDIK: [panicking] Ellia!! Ellia, please! This isn't you!
[She flings him several yards into the brush and lets out a long
triumphant shriek.]
[Shots of Atlantis team members in various parts of the forest,
pausing as they hear the eerie, chilling sound. Everyone is worrying
about those who are not in sight. All head in the direction of the
shriek.]
[Cut to Zaddik on the ground, bleeding from his mouth.]
McKAY: Zaddik!
[They race over, Beckett pulling off his backpack.]
BECKETT: Y'all right?
ZADDIK: [moans, shifts a bit]
BECKETT: Don't try to move.
ZADDIK: [weakly] It was Ellia, but it wasn't her fault.
[McKay and Beckett exchange a glance over Zaddik, unsure of what to
say. The sound of approaching villagers attracts their attention.]
McKAY: No-no-*no*! You people need to go *back* to the village! It is
*not* safe here!
GORAN: [looking at Zaddik as he approaches] Who is that?
[McKay and Beckett stare as Goran comes up to stand over Zaddik.]
ZADDIK: [to Goran] Don't you remember me?
GORAN: No. No, it can't be!
[McKay and Beckett look at both men, then at each other, confused.]
GORAN: You were taken by the Daimos!
ZADDIK: No, Father.
McKAY: Father?! I don't understand. You're his son?!
[Shots of villagers craning to look at the man on the ground, who is
clearly older than Goran.]
GORAN: If my son were alive, he'd be thirty four years old!
ZADDIK: [whispering] Precisely.
[McKay and Beckett look appalled, Goran still looks confused.]
[Dissolve to same scene, but Sheppard, Teyla and Dex have arrived.
Callup moves briskly from a group of villagers to the Atlantis team
and Goran, still near Zaddik. The latter is looking worse.]
CALLUP: There's another one of those things out there. Look what
it
did to Zaddik! I say we go after it *now*!
SHEPPARD: No one's goin' *any*where. We'll handle this!
Stay calm.
Take it easy.
[Shots of the Atlantis team looking uneasy as Beckett approaches
Sheppard.]
BECKETT: I've given him something for the pain, but his injuries
are
too severe. [deep breath] He's not goin' t'make it.
GORAN: [still standing over Zaddik] This can't be happening.
It's not
possible.
ZADDIK: I'm... sorry. Don't... blame Ellia. It was my idea.
[Goran is still not catching on. The following speech is over shots
of Goran and the Atlantis team reacting in ways from confusion to
disgust to horror.]
ZADDIK: You... have to understand that when I found her, I'd just
lost my own wife and son to a fever.
[Hissy flashback music, and dissolve to a camera slinking around a
tree in the forest to zoom in on the young, unconscious Ellia.]
ZADDIK: She was just lying there, helpless.
[Cut to a flashback shot of a young Zaddik who, frankly, was pretty
hot, especially with compassion for the helpless welling up in him.
He kneels, and turns the crumpled form over, revealing the very alien
features of a young Wraith.]
ZADDIK: [present, weakening voice] When I saw her, I knew what I had
to do. As I told you, in the beginning... she survived on food and
water like *any* young girl.
[Still in flashback, but cut to a scene of Ellia in her room, falling
off the bed to the floor, gasping in agony.]
ZADDIK: Then the hunger came.
[In flashback, the young Zaddik approaches Ellia and grasps her
hands.]
ELLIA: No, no!
ZADDIK: It's all right. Take what you need.
ELLIA: I can't!
ZADDIK: Yes, you can.
[He places Ellia's hand in the middle of his chest and groans in
pain
as she feeds.]
[Cut back to present day in the forest, close-up of older Zaddik on
the ground. He can barely move, even to look at whomever he's
speaking to.]
ZADDIK: She took... what she needed from me... to survive... until...
I perfected the serum.
[Flashback to younger Zaddik being fed upon. Ellia doesn't seem
to be
enjoying it much, and he nearly passes out. He does fall to the
floor, breaking the connection between her hand and his chest,
snapping Ellia out of her feeding frenzy.]
ELLIA: Father? Father!
[Flashback camera pans down to young Zaddik, now with silver in his
hair. He's conscious, but seems unable to speak. Ellia cradles
him,
crying.]
ELLIA: I'm so sorry!
[Cut from flashback Ellia sobbing over her father to present day,
Sheppard and Beckett looking *very* uncomfortable.]
SHEPPARD: She never fed on anyone after that?
[There is a very long pause.]
ZADDIK: [firmly] No.
[He flinches a little, as if in pain, and the camera pans back to
Sheppard, Beckett and McKay, who are exchanging `what now?'
looks]
SHEPPARD: All right. Teyla? Ronon? You're with me. The rest of
you
stay here.
BECKETT: Colonel, the retrovirus is acting quickly. The human part of
her is almost gone.
SHEPPARD: You said she killed the other Wraith and saved McKay's
life.
BECKETT: Yes, but I'm not sure she knew what she was doing.
She's
operatin' on a purely animal level right now.
TEYLA: Is there nothing you can do for her?
BECKETT: I might be able to reverse the effects, if you bring her
back alive, but I doubt she'll cooperate. She's also stronger
and
faster than any Wraith I've ever seen.
SHEPPARD: [squeaks] Great!
[The Wraith hunting team heads out.]
GORAN: [to Zaddik] All this time, we thought you were dead!
ZADDIK: There was no other way. They [cuts eyes toward villagers]
never would have accepted us... and I couldn't abandon her.
GORAN: Why?
ZADDIK: She... needed me.
[Cut to Sheppard, Dex and Teyla in the misty woods.]
BECKETT: [over radio] Colonel? This is Beckett.
SHEPPARD: Go ahead.
BECKETT: Zaddik's dead.
[Sheppard and Teyla exchange a look.]
SHEPPARD: Understood.
[They walk on, then Sheppard pauses when he sees Dex stopped off the
trail, staring away.]
DEX: She knows we're here. [approaches Sheppard] She's
watchin' us.
[Pan to Teyla, who has her Wraith sensing face on, which is to say,
her eyes are eerily unfocused and she looks a little stoned.]
TEYLA: Ellia? We want to help you! Doctor Beckett can make you
better, but you have to come with us! We will not hurt you!
[Pause, while she looks around for any reaction. A twig breaks and
Teyla turns around in time to face Ellia as the Wraith leaps from the
underbrush and knocks her to the ground with a shriek, which attracts
the men's attention and they rush toward the scuffle. Meantime,
Ellia
is crouched over Teyla and it looks and sounds as if they're
having a
slap fight.]
[As the men come over a rise in the forest floor, Teyla tosses Ellia
off of her and Ronon seamlessly fires his energy weapon at her. Ellia
pauses, then scrambles away out of sight. Teyla is unconscious on the
ground, and both men crouch by her.]
SHEPPARD: Aww...
[He looks up to catch where Ellia is headed as Dex checks Teyla for
injuries. Dex's fingers come away from her head wet with blood.
Sheppard strips out of his jacket and puts his vest back on.]
DEX: [referring to Ellia] She took a bullet in the head when I hit
her.
SHEPPARD: [indicating Teyla] Stay with her!
DEX: Sheppard!
SHEPPARD: That's an order.
[Sheppard runs off after Ellia as Dex places the rolled up jacket
under Teyla's head, then stares grimly after him.]
[Long shots from a few different angles of Sheppard making his way
through the woods, very grim and purposeful.]
[Back to Dex and Teyla, as she regains consciousness.]
DEX: Teyla!
TEYLA: [sitting up] What happened? Where's Colonel Sheppard?
DEX: He went after the creature!
TEYLA: You let him go alone?!?
DEX: He wanted me to stay with you.
TEYLA: [with an exasperated breath] I am *fine*. Go!
DEX: Aren't we supposed to follow his orders?
TEYLA: Sometimes, we are allowed to make exceptions.
DEX: And who decides when it's one of those times?
TEYLA: *We* do.
DEX: [springs to his feet] That's good enough.
[Dex runs off after Sheppard who, after a quick cut to his part of
the forest, we see sneaking around large fallen logs. A roar and a
growl bring him around to aim at Ellia, who is pacing down a fallen
log over his head, looking hungrily intent.]
SHEPPARD: Ellia?! [pause as she continues to stalk toward him]
Don't
make me do this.
[She stops, shrieks and postures as if about to jump. Sheppard fires,
but she's in the air before the bullets start to hit and brings
him
to the ground. They grapple, Ellia looking for a way inside that vest
and Sheppard pulling out a wicked looking combat knife.]
[Ellia grabs his knife arm and Sheppard is pushing her away with his
free hand. Quick close-up on Sheppard's knife arm shows that
Ellia's
transformed claw-hand is drawing blood. Looks like a stalemate until
a blast from Dex's energy weapon blows her off of Sheppard. Dex
fires
again, hitting her. She gets up again. It takes four shots from
Dex's
energy weapon and one from Sheppard's pistol to kill her.]
[They stare at her body for a few moments to make sure she's
really
dead, then Ronon catches sight of John's bleeding arm.]
DEX: You OK?
SHEPPARD: Yeah. She tried feedin' on me.
[They look at Ellia's crumpled form again.]
DEX: She wasn't gonna let us take her back.
SHEPPARD: [who wants to believe, but may be having trouble] Yeah, I
know.
[Dex claps him on the shoulder and walks away. John stares for a
moment more at Ellia, then lifts his injured arm, which is now
covered with blood. Her claw hand made quite a wound. Cue foreboding
music, and... ]
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